Reviewer: lunaginnypotterw
Date: 05/20/11 19:13
Chapter: Jingle All the Way

wow i wish u wrote an epilouge saying oh idk that is how they fell in

Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 12/21/09 13:25
Chapter: Jingle All the Way


I am the most un-eloquent reviewer on the planet, so I'm just going to tell you that I LOVE IT!

If course, I already told you I loved it through PM, but since you're awesome and all, I figured I'd leave you a review to tell you again! :D

I especially like your characterization of Peter- he was written as a real friend, not just a tag-along.


Author's Response: Aw, thank you Wes! I love that you love it, haha. Peter was kind of tough for me; I didn't want to make him just another Sirius or James because that wouldn't have been right, but I don't think he was a tag-along at *all*, so it ended up as was, so thanks for your compliments on it! Thanks for being such a great beta :) {BeccA}

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/15/09 23:47
Chapter: Jingle All the Way

Well, I am glad that everything turned out and they had their party after all! That's what Christmas is all about, right? Having fun and being with those you love, whether they be friends or family.
Talk about a Scrooge, even as a teenager, Snape was well, miserable. But I'm glad the girls got it all together!
Thanks for a great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm also glad they had their party:D Originally, they didn't, but I figured that as my class final, Lily deserved a much bigger role than she had. And yeah, Snape was pretty miserable. This was pre-SWM incident, as we can see by Lily and Snape's friendship, but only 5 months away or so, therefore he was already pretty dark by then. Oh, you're welcome! Rather, thank YOU! {BeccA}

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