Reviewer: SPLongshanks
Date: 10/11/10 9:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

I was amused by this interesting Dickens-like take of Harry Potter's world. I felt they were all a bit out of character, but it was a refreshing read.

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 01/12/10 23:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this take on the Dickens story (quite a lot more than the original story, in fact). One nitpick, though--Harry knew in canon that Severus loved his mum; he told Voldemort as much. No biggie, though. And Scrooge is a nearly perfect model for Snape. So if Ebenezer can change, so too can our Severus.

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 12/16/09 14:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was wonderful. I enjoyed reading it. It's a great tribute to how Severus's life should have turned out if he lived.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/16/09 0:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww! What a sweet ending! I must admit, I was in tears when Snape told Harry of his love for his mother. And when Severus gave little Albus the bear.
I knew that Snape could change, and be a good person...He just needed guidence.
Thanks for a lovely Christmas story!

Reviewer: Cat Man Do
Date: 12/15/09 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is an interesting version of Charles Dicken's A Christmas Carol. In fact, It is the most interesting one I've ever read.

Reviewer: Im_No_Muggle
Date: 12/15/09 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

A mediocre story. I thought Severus and Albus were out of character, and the "humbug" line was just too cliche.

Author's Response: I´m glad you are much more positive about the story in the private mail we had, ´I´m no muggle´ and that you didn´t think it was ´mediocre´ after all. As I said: sometimes Snape sounds more like Scrooge, because of the Dickens link.

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