Reviewer: Evie Potter
Date: 12/19/12 23:41
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

great first chapter!

Reviewer: voldidracosnape
Date: 08/20/12 20:27
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

my draco shall never do such a thing >_

Reviewer: dracolover15
Date: 09/02/11 14:15
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

Nice story but really depressing...I hope he falls in love with her next!

Reviewer: md21
Date: 07/10/11 13:22
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

dude good ass story keep it up.

Reviewer: FeedMikey
Date: 04/04/11 19:33
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

That was kinda lame... To be honest...

Reviewer: bdminniehearts3
Date: 12/15/10 13:10
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

great please continue

Reviewer: tonia27
Date: 11/21/10 18:46
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

please update it soon!

Reviewer: Dylaniella
Date: 07/19/10 22:51
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

Average.

Reviewer: georgeisnext
Date: 01/05/10 14:55
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

Cool. Very dark... it puteys MAlfoy perfectly. Cant wait for whats next.

Reviewer: _Hermione_Ginny_
Date: 12/23/09 12:22
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

Kind of violent but pretty good!!

Reviewer: PotterGirl714
Date: 12/17/09 18:40
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

Wow! That was really emotional! I feel so bad for her! Please post more soon! I want to know what happens next!!!

Reviewer: clarabelle
Date: 12/17/09 15:23
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

whoa

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 12/17/09 12:55
Chapter: The Beginning of the End (Prologue)

Ouch! I have to say, what a way to begin a story! Poor Hermione, she doesn't deserve such treatment. I hope everything turns out okay in the end, mostly because I'm a fluff shipper, lol.

I will definitely be on the lookout for more chapters. I shall stay tuned. Good beginning to your story.

~Jess

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