Reviewer: dancengirl
Date: 01/25/12 6:14
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

that was excellent!

Reviewer: morthathe wizard
Date: 09/04/11 18:25
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

that was funny i loved it

Reviewer: candygrl1696
Date: 08/14/11 11:30
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

That was funny!

Reviewer: Annie Magus
Date: 08/29/10 20:05
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

awesome. you're a really talented writer, and a good sense of humor to go along with it. i really enjoyed this one!! =D

Reviewer: Fifth
Date: 08/28/10 7:43
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

That was so great! I"m still laughing as I write this! And it's exactly something I could see Sirius doing! Hahahaha!

Reviewer: aubinator
Date: 07/01/10 22:59
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

I definitely smiled!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 06/16/10 21:59
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

Eh, your urge to get me to write a review was enough. Well! that was funny haha =] I quite liked it. Good job

Reviewer: avdreader
Date: 02/12/10 7:12
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

Yes, I liked it! I can soo see Sirius doing something like that.

Reviewer: Tamsin
Date: 01/01/10 3:00
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

I smiled! :D It was very entertaining - I loved the dialogue between Sirius and Lily ("delegated"). Your Sirius is exactly how I pictured a teenage Sirius to act, as exemplified by the line: "I'm Sirius Black. When I was born the first thing I did was wink at the nurse..." Great story! Please keep writing!

Reviewer: Tamsin
Date: 01/01/10 3:00
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

I smiled! :D It was very entertaining - I loved the dialogue between Sirius and Lily ("delegated"). Your Sirius is exactly how I pictured a teenage Sirius to act, as exemplified by the line: "I'm Sirius Black. When I was born the first thing I did was wink at the nurse..." Great story! Please keep writing!

Reviewer: Sparkle Lamp
Date: 12/28/09 23:30
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

xDDD this made my night.
i'm going to watch the sandlot now.

Author's Response: Sounds like an evening well-spent. Glad to provide inspiration! :D

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 12/24/09 13:05
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

HAHAH this absolutely made me smile. this was hilarious!!!! so well done :)

Author's Response: Well! I achieved my end. I shall proceed to write it in my book of achievements. #2...made someone smile. :P

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 12/21/09 19:43
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

That's a really funny story, how Sirius kisses the professor in the end. Ha ha ha!

Author's Response: Thanks! Funnily enough, the end came as a surprise to me as well. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 12/16/09 18:44
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

I smiled. Really, that was very good. It's just too bad that a teenage crush like that had to be cut short so soon.

Author's Response: Ah yes. However, I think he recovered. :P Thank you for the compliment, and for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hiyas-said-hi
Date: 12/15/09 20:33
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

I smiled. And reviewed.

Author's Response: I can see that! Thank you. :)

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 12/14/09 20:07
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

Haha, Hannah! You are so AWESOME!!!
Yeah. That's all I really have to say. You already know I find this story hilarious :D And amazing. (yes, and AWESOME) I love it so much, I think I must add it to my favs :D
Thank you for writing-and letting me beta!!!
Andi (=AWESOME *and yes, I shall stop saying that... eventually... )

Author's Response: Awww Andi thanks! And thanks for all your AWESOME work on it. I've liked it much better since you worked on it. :D You make my day! - Hannah

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 12/14/09 19:35
Chapter: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

haha that was funny!

Author's Response: I try ;) Sometimes it works out. haha

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