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Name: Snowlily (Signed) · Date: 07/15/11 10:02 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
That was so, so sweet and funny and good! Especially about Merlin's blessing. =)

Name: LunaLestrange00 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/11 8:38 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
Rofl! I LOVE your Luna stories! She is one of my favourite characters, and I share her personality as well as her name, so I love reading about her. I also loved Snape's "soft-looking" expression.

Author's Response: Yes, I love Luna as well. She has that sort of effect on people, doesn't she?

Name: Seer_Witch (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 15:44 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
I loved the little detail--Luna, curling ribbons into her hair, and then adding more colours instead of taking out the extra. It was a little thing, but very IC.
Same thing with the extra lap around her dormitory with the presents--very Luna-esque. Just something quirky I agree that she'd do.

The way you write, too, is quite like Luna. Well, some of the narration is quite like normal writing (your style, surely) and then it was jump between things that you would say and things that Luna might say, like a cross-narration. Usually while she's talking. It's a little disconcerting, but kind of funny.
Just out of curiosity, why was Ginny so nervous?

Luna is SO CUTE. I'm so glad you made her quite as cute as she really is, because I just love Luna. I'm quite pleased that you did her justice. Her "knack of embarrassing honesty" was there, her carefree attitude, her strange kind of charm...I liked it ;)

Author's Response: I'm gld you like the story. s for Ginny, I find strnge behavior in generl seems to trouble people, nd when Snpe is involved...you n imgine.

Name: SingingWren (Signed) · Date: 12/07/10 21:29 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
Haha! Brilliant! That was absolutely hilarious, yet rather sweet at the same time. I loved Snape's 'ulterior motives' suggestions. It was so in character.

The interactions between the characters were the best part. With both Ginny and Professor Snape, the dialogue was believable and un-cliche, while continuing to be both true to their characters and highly entertaining.

“I didn’t get you a scarf, sir.” That line stood out to me just because it is so Luna, so in tune with how I perceive her. You captured the essence of her character perfectly.

In terms of style, I liked how the writing flowed. The story was nicely paced. I was neither bored nor rushed and each key comedic moment was timed perfectly with a small lull in between, something which I have had difficulty finding in this type of story. Most people throw the humour in carelessly. It seemed carefully laid out in this story.

I found the little 'moment' between Luna and Snape absolutely adorable, and had to restrain myself from crying "D'aww!" out loud. Somehow I can totally see Luna managing to break through his defenses by being so completely different from anything he's ever encountered. I should read more stories that feature the both of them...

Overall, lovely job and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Author's Response: People should not underestimate the powers of Luna Lovegood. I'm glad you see it now.

Name: SlytherinDaydreamer (Signed) · Date: 05/17/10 6:35 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
Loved it! You captured Luna's character wonderfully! Usually people write her as very random and high but you made her realistic yet she still has that dreamy essence to her.
This made me smile. Thank you for a brilliant fic.

Author's Response: They have it as an AudioFic too, you know. I hope you will give that a listen as well

Name: TheColorsScarletAndGold (Signed) · Date: 04/03/10 17:46 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
this is amazing! i love it and it shows luna how she is-loving to make everyone happy. i like snape being shown in a new light!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so much!

Name: kickingchick94 (Signed) · Date: 02/03/10 17:34 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
I laughed so much reading this story, it is something that Luna would definitely do in her time at Hogwarts. I can see her skipping through the dungeons with a line of presents behind her, and especially Snape dropping the Puffskein on his desk. Great Job!!!

Author's Response: Yes, the story was a great deal of fun to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.

Name: annajo (Signed) · Date: 12/19/09 13:57 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
such a cute story!it was great to read about the kinder side of snape that we only really get to see in the pensieve chapter of dh. the characterization was right on and totally believable. thank you for this heart warming and smile creating story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! And this is a contest piece, so wish me luck!

Name: armagod679 (Signed) · Date: 12/16/09 18:36 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
I LOVE IT! Luna's character is very well written, and I like the almost-soft side of Snape at the end.

Author's Response: Yes, but Luna being Luna had to bring him out of it before it got too out of control.

Name: madhumakhi (Signed) · Date: 12/15/09 4:09 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
It's a really funny story , especially the way Luna's presents floated behind her Imagining her in such a position made me laugh . And Snape's reaction to her giving presents to grumpy ppl was very well written :)

Author's Response: I'll have to do a drawing to show the true effect of the image.

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 12/14/09 22:28 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
What a cute story! And what a sweet idea, to cheer 'grumpy' people up at Christmas time.
I'm glad Snape did'nt get uptight over his gift. He, at least accepted it with good grace.
Ooooo!! What I would'nt give to have a cute little puffskein!
Luna is such a sweet and caring person!
Thanks for a great story!

Author's Response: I love writing stories about Luna and Snape. They have such a unique chemistry.

Name: Hiyas-said-hi (Signed) · Date: 12/14/09 20:12 · For: Christmas Cheer: Love, Luna
Nice! Fun...Christmasy...

Author's Response: That was the idea.

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