Reviewer: magic to do
Date: 06/23/11 6:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, good imagination

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 12/10/09 1:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw, so beautifully bittersweet, though it's more bitter than sweet. It's almost like he's losing everything twice, since he's dying and also remembering when he lost Lily. Absolutely lovely. I hope to read more of your work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I tried so hard to think of a really happy memory for poor Snape, but I couldn't without it being unrealistic.... Thanks again.

Reviewer: midnightred777
Date: 12/09/09 23:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved it!!!!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/09/09 1:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Poor Severus! Such sad memories. His only happiness came when he was with Lily and at Hogwarts, with Lily.
No wonder he was so grumpy in later years.
If only things were different for him...
Thanks for a grea tsory!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I know, I love Snape too -sob!-

Reviewer: Virgil
Date: 12/08/09 16:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Is this really your first fanfic? Nicely done. I've always wished Sev/Lily could have happened. -tear-

Author's Response: Thank you!! As for Sev/Lily, I feel the same way :'(

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