Reviewer: Lunalovegoodrox
Date: 12/05/09 21:51
Chapter: Stave One: Myrtle's Ghost

Very good! I enjoyed this chapter immensely and I'm looking forward to the next one! (I liked the bit about the doornail/dormouse). :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I like the doornail/dormouse joke too. I've not written a humour story before, and I found coming up with jokes wasn't easy, but that one seemed almost ready made (more thanks to Mr Dickens and Ms Rowling than me, really).

Reviewer: Kif
Date: 12/05/09 7:12
Chapter: Stave One: Myrtle's Ghost

Nice to see you writing again - I have missed your work loads! Anyway, nicely done with this - loved the interaction between Flitwick and Snape.

Author's Response: I'm sorry I've been away so long. Ihope to be back more regularly from now on. I made sure I'd written most of this before submitting (I've written 4 of 5 chapters), so it won't be left hanging (although I'll probably run out of time to get them all in before Christmas). Glad you liked Flitwick - Snape doesn't have a nephew of course, so I needed a replacement character. A colleague seemed obvious, and I always thought Flitwick was the nicest of the Hogwarts faculty.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/04/09 22:01
Chapter: Stave One: Myrtle's Ghost

Hi, I just read your story, and I thought it was wondrful! I love the Dickens Christmas Carol, I watch it every Christmas season, so I was intrigued by this tale of Snape, being visited by 3 ghosts.
I thought the part with Moaning Myrtle;s ghost was cute, well, for Snape it was'nt cute, but I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Thanks for a great story! :0)

Author's Response: I love A Christmas Carol as well, it's such a simple but brilliant story. Myrtle was an obvious choice to replace Marley: I partly wrote this story just so I could start with "Myrtle was dead, to begin with"!

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 12/04/09 21:56
Chapter: Stave One: Myrtle's Ghost

Oh, yeah! I get to be the first person to review this story!

I am very excited to see this story develop. I have seen so many different adaptations of different stories, but I don't think I have ever seen the one you have attempted. It is so unbelievably clever, I can't believe no one has ever done it before.

I am a bit nervous to see Snape break out into a manic Christmas cheer, though, but I am sure you will carry it out beautifully.

Author's Response: I'm surprised myself no one (that I've found) has done this before (I did check before starting). All the ghosts in it do make it an obvious idea, I think. Rest assured that Snape will not go completely manically happy by the end, although it'll need some work. The last chapter is the only one I haven't written yet, so I'm interested myself to see how it'll turn out!

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