Reviews For The Last Line
Reviewer: PotterLover123
Date: 02/03/11 21:53
Chapter: The Last Line

:( sad ending but good story!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: heirofgryffindoorcasey103
Date: 12/24/09 15:11
Chapter: Fickle's Choice

ughhh. pleaseee hget back with potter.

Reviewer: twistedheart
Date: 08/25/09 21:50
Chapter: The Last Line

i can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 01/23/08 3:36
Chapter: Alone in Turbulation

mel makes me feel so sick...i dunno y....her character is like...haiz... i just hope harry n her wont b together......he deserves someone better... come to think of it... cho's character is better than mel...

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/16/07 3:13
Chapter: The Last Line

that was cool.Is voldmort realy dead? are you going to write another that would be realy cool.

Author's Response: The third one is called The Epilogue. Check it out.

Reviewer: mbailey1218
Date: 01/12/07 23:41
Chapter: Major Clippings

ok so... i pretty much hate harry right now...

Reviewer: fizz_sporty
Date: 01/02/07 21:34
Chapter: The Last Line

Omg...that was cruel, I feel SO bad for have to have to have to make them come back together again!, the end almost made me cry...that was so sad.

Reviewer: PottersFire
Date: 11/20/06 20:33
Chapter: The Last Line

Well....I'm sorry but...Melody you were a bit stuck up and know it all. But (there must be something wrong with me) they HAVE to get back togeather! It's vital!

Reviewer: HPin urface
Date: 11/14/06 3:49
Chapter: The Last Line

:( mean

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 11/09/06 23:00
Chapter: The Last Line

I hate you so much right now. >.< I"m so MAD!! SHE CANT JUST WALK AWAY!!!!!!! ah well. i don't really hate you. just make the third one as good as the first two. lol. i'm sure you'll do fine. good story.

Author's Response: Okay. You convinced me. I started writing a plotline for The Epilogue.

Reviewer: alex_the_man704
Date: 11/09/06 5:14
Chapter: The Last Line

ps ur a great writer!
please make another one

Reviewer: KnuckleHead6270
Date: 11/08/06 21:21
Chapter: The Last Line

Very good story by the way! but...
now don't get me wrong I loved your story but... pooooooor harry.
I can't wait for the next story!

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 11/08/06 20:16
Chapter: The Last Line

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE submit the next story soon!!

Reviewer: IluvTFelton
Date: 11/08/06 19:46
Chapter: The Last Line

omg nooooo why why why, why cant they be together!!!!!

Reviewer: carlay_parfait
Date: 11/08/06 17:49
Chapter: The Last Line

: ( it's done? NO! When is the new one coming out? I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 11/05/06 22:36
Chapter: Lying

amagad. omg. lol. another cliffy.

Reviewer: Xain
Date: 11/05/06 22:26
Chapter: Finding the Track

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i loffff u

Reviewer: KnuckleHead6270
Date: 11/04/06 20:39
Chapter: Abandonment of the Body

oo ooo ooo the suspense!

Reviewer: KnuckleHead6270
Date: 10/31/06 22:30
Chapter: Finding the Track


Reviewer: sniffles for Snuffles
Date: 10/31/06 19:31
Chapter: Finding the Track

YAY they're finally back together! can't wait for more!

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