Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 11/14/10 12:51
Chapter: Prologue

This sounds really dark, and really interesting

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 12/25/09 23:16
Chapter: Prologue

Wow, excactly how I imagined it. Very realistic, and very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks! :]

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/14/09 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sameness

Wow, that's really sad, that Tom wished something would shrival up, because he felt miserable. A very cruel child.
He's definitely a loner...No friends, he won't accept help, from that Mr. Paris...They're trying to help him, and he's resisting.
He is indeed a very angry child.
Thanks for a great story, Tom is really creepy in this chapter...

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/14/09 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sameness

Wow, that's really sad, that Tom wished something would shrival up, because he felt miserable. A very cruel child.
He's definitely a loner...No friends, he won't accept help, from that Mr. Paris...They're trying to help him, and he's resisting.
He is indeed a very angry child.
Thanks for a great story, Tom is really creepy in this chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks for reading again! Yes, he is one creepy, angry, messed up child :( Ends up being a creepy, angry messed up man too lol. ~hotbutterbeer

Reviewer: midnightred777
Date: 12/09/09 23:42
Chapter: Prologue

i like it but i like to read all of it Good Job tho!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it ;) It's really busy around here because of the holidays, I don't have any free time! Second chapter (well first chapter really) up soon, I promise! :) ~hotbutterbeer

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/04/09 22:28
Chapter: Prologue

Hi, I just read your story, happy to be your first review. I do hope you get more, because I thought this story was brilliant! You described Merope's sad state perfectly, sad and pitiful. Poor girl!
I'm glad that she had her boy in a safe place, although it's a shame that she died. Perhaps do to the fact that she never got proper care. At least the baby seems healthy.
I hope you get more reviews, thanks for a great story, and I love your name! Hotbutterbeer sounds great on a cold winter's night! ;0)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Awesome review for my very first one! :D I'm really excited for the story, Voldemort is an interesting point of view to write from and I've never read a fanfic centered on his story, so I thought people might want to hear it. :] Kind of a downer though, it's a bit depressing to sit here thinking about his life! haha. :) Thank you again! ~hotbutterbeer

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