COME ON!! that can't be the end!! Please continue this!!!
Great story! I like the plot! UPDATE SOON!! I wanna find out what happens next!
more please! that's fantastic and i love cliffhangers!
Luv it. It's really good. Now hurry up post another chapter! Cliffhangers are evil!!!! LOL, just kidding. But seriously, I can'twait to see what happens next.
I cant wait to find out what happens next! What a cliffhanger! Great chapter.
I can't believe you left it hanging there!! This story is great, I've just read all 3 chapters through and loved chapter 1 from Hermione's POV. Can't wait for chapter 4...
getting even better keep posting
great... but please update soon!!!
U better write more fast!!!! great start both of them, just rad ur first to chapters.
I really like the way you started off your story, most beginning chapters suck, but not this one! Please update soon! Smooches ~bri
v good a big 10 ps plz plz plz plz plz r&r my fic called harry potter and the order of the lion.
That waz sad...but I love ur storie! Update soon plz
awww now thats just sad!!!! i really love what you have so far, please keep it up!! i cant wait to find out what happens next. hope to see more soon!! ~angie~
it's good!! update soon!