Reviews For Soldiers
Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 05/03/11 13:14
Chapter: Epilogue

this story is magical, and the ending was perfect. thank you

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the way I ended it :)

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 05/02/11 16:59
Chapter: Soldier

Hahah I'm sooo happy!!! My heart has been beating about a thousand times per minute! Ahhhhhh!!!
This chapter is perfect! Seriously. Awesome. Except the part about Charis is sad :( So, like you requested, I'll tell you about my thoughts on Charis. So at first Charis had potential to be like Cedrella (a real person not a pureblood doll) which was good, and even though she was still sort of annoying, she was just the little sister. BUT THEN, she started drifting away from Cedrella and told on her about Sep and oh my gosh, I hated her soo much! But now I feel like I know why she did that: b/c Cedrella raised her that way. It's all very confusing because I feel like Charis shoud be like Drell but that's the exact opposite she was ever taught. And she's just a kid for gosh sakes and all she wanted was to be a good pureblood and marry Lucifer (which to me sounds appalling, but whatever floats her boat). But stupid Arcturus had to ruin it! I was wondering what would happen with the wedding but I NEVER thought Charis would be substituted for Drell! That's just so....wrong!
But seriously, the most important thing is Drell and Sep! :) And this chapter makes me soo happy! I almost couldn't believe she even left in the first place and then I couldn't believe that she actually wasn't found! Also, Sep was very dramatic in this chapter ;) haha but I'm glad he listened to her! I hope they figure out a way to save Charis...and I hope they get married :) I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yay I was so excited for you to read this chapter! It's the second to last one, there's only an epilogue left that ties up some of the loose ends you mentioned... :) Anyway it's really interesting to hear what you think of Charis! The way I see her, she had the potential to be more than just a pureblood pawn, but because of the way she was raised, she couldn't do it- she's a total product of her society. Cedrella was only able to realize that there was more to herself because Septimus showed her that there was, and Charis didn't have anyone like that. Poor kid :( thanks so much for reading and reviewing all the way through!!!

Reviewer: monkeyshine89
Date: 05/02/11 12:42
Chapter: Prologue: Here I Am

I love your characters, especially Cedrell, she is realistic and reaches out to the reader. Charis is a great character too, she is the quintessential product of her society! I would write more, but I am exhausted, I'm sure you would write beautiful original fiction

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: DarkSunflower
Date: 04/30/11 12:10
Chapter: Rolling in the Deep

FINALLY! Merlin, I thought se'd never get away from that house... Good riddance. Yeesh.

Very well written, as usual! I'm excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!! The next chapter is up and waiting to be read :)

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 04/29/11 22:33
Chapter: Rolling in the Deep

YES! Finally! I'm sooo happy she left! :) This chapter is fantastic. I really like all the character developments - Charis is so frustrating, but still interesting - but Cedrella! Her epiphany was so perfect! I can't even believe how awesome this chapter is! Your writing is perfect!

P.S. Rolling In The Deep is my favorite song!!!

Author's Response: thanks so much! I love that song too. I'm glad you like what I've done with Charis...in some ways I think she is the most complicated character. I'd be interested to know more of your thoughts on her! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 04/28/11 16:50
Chapter: Isn't it Always Love

AHHH!!! This is such a cliffhanger! Oh my gosh, this chapter was really, really awesome! I LOVE this story so much, I hope to read more soon! :) Also, I hope Cedrella leaves her family and chooses Septimus...

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! The next chapter is already waiting to be validated, so hopefully it won't be long. And I guess you'll have to wait and see... :)

Reviewer: OtterMoone
Date: 04/27/11 22:32
Chapter: Isn't it Always Love

Ah, you updated! Yay! And oh my, you left us at a cliff-hanger.... Well, try not to leave us for so long this time, please? And very good, as always (:

Author's Response: Don't worry, the next chapter is already waiting to be validated! I finished the whole story while I was sick a few weeks ago... thanks for reading!! :)

Reviewer: haaaaayyleeeeeyy
Date: 04/25/11 1:58
Chapter: Isn't it Always Love

arghh! Please write more! Its a great story and ive read in avidly :P i

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 04/24/11 5:47
Chapter: Isn't it Always Love

I just read this whole story in one go – it is fabulous! Cedrella and Septimus are so real, but then, Charis and Arcturus Black and all the others are, too. I NEED to know what happens next! Cedrella had better run away in the middle of the wedding and go find Septimus, or something equally dramatic. She can't seriously marry Caspar.... Update soon please!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Creating characters is my favorite thing about writing so I'm really glad you like them.

Reviewer: lifewhatever
Date: 01/05/11 18:20
Chapter: Only Wish I Could Forget

This chapter is beautifully written. The struggles that Cedrella and Septimus deal with are so real and painful and shows how much they love each other. You give all your characters great depth. This chapter really shows Cedrella's inside demons. Good job and update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Making the characterization seem realistic and not forced is one of the things I try hardest to do... more updates coming soon! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: CassandraWood
Date: 12/25/10 14:44
Chapter: Only Wish I Could Forget

Aaaaaargh! Update soon please! Pretty please?

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 12/20/10 14:16
Chapter: Only Wish I Could Forget

Ahhhh! NO!!!! Drell and Sep need to be together! This chapter is beautifully written - you are fantastic - but I don't think I could stand it if they aren't together. :(
I can't wait for the next chapter...and hopefully for some good news! Thank you for being such an amazing author! I love this fic!

Reviewer: CloverSun
Date: 12/19/10 6:24
Chapter: Only Wish I Could Forget

Thanks for the update!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: witch1561
Date: 12/19/10 4:21
Chapter: Only Wish I Could Forget

I have just caught up with all of your story so far, and I would like to say first that I have enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to reading more. I particularly like your description of the relationship between Cedrella and Septimus before it's discovered: they make no secret of the fact that they are attracted to each other which other writers often get confused about for similar situations. I also like the descriptions of Charis and Calliope who are very believable.

The one criticism at the moment is that Cedrella is being too much of a wimp. I know Slytherins are not known for their bravery, but at the moment it feels like the only reason she's in Slytherin is because you've read that comment by Slughorn about how he got the whole set except for Sirius. If I was sorting Cedrella, she'd be in Ravenclaw, or possibly Hufflepuff - although of course we know she's eventually going to ditch her family for the Weasleys. She doesn't seem to have any ambition - Charis does, she wants to marry well and have a brilliant social life as Mrs Malfoy. Cedrella has never really wanted that - she keeps trying to put it off - but she equally doesn't seem to have strong ambitions to forge a brilliant career for herself, knowledge is prized for its own sake. I suppose the problem with this comment is that it isn't really possible to put her in Ravenclaw now, so I think she needs to discover some ambition for herself.

Apart from that, I find this a very interesting and enjoyable story. I hope there are more updates soon.

Kitty

Reviewer: I told you so
Date: 12/18/10 20:27
Chapter: Only Wish I Could Forget

I have but one critique, it was a littile jumpy when she went from the owlry to the libary, otherwise keep up the good work.

Reviewer: I told you so
Date: 12/18/10 20:26
Chapter: Only Wish I Could Forget

I have but one critique, it was a littile jumpy when she went from the owlry to the libary, otherwise keep up the good work.

Reviewer: dinosoprano
Date: 11/21/10 22:23
Chapter: Home

I absolutely love this story and I can't wait to see where this goes. I have always wondered about Septimus and Cedrella and I even began one of my own though it is actually very different from yours yet similar in some ways. I read this wondering what others thought of her disown..ing...ment, whatever it's called. =]

Reviewer: CloverSun
Date: 11/07/10 8:15
Chapter: Home

This is great!! I really think you write better and better as the chapter goes!! I can't wait to read morez90; I really hope you update soon!!!

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 11/02/10 16:04
Chapter: Home

This is possible the best chapter yet. You write really well, I'm impressed with every update! Seriously, I love the way you describe Cedrella's feelings/thoughts. It all seems so honest and real. I just wish she could see Septimus again. :( Caspar has to be the lamest fiancee ever! He's so self centered and .... eh. I hope Cedrella can find a way to escape this whole mess. By the sound of the last sentence, I bet she will. ;)
I LOVE this fic so much! Thank you for updating!

ps. I love your song choices ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I think the reason I'm able to get inside Cedrella's head is that she is a lot like me... anyway, stay tuned- there is much more to come :)

Reviewer: lifewhatever
Date: 11/01/10 7:31
Chapter: Home

great chapter! your story is just so developed and thought out, and their are always surprises! I love it! Please, please update soon.

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