Reviews For And What If...?
Reviewer: LovelyWonder
Date: 12/28/09 4:00
Chapter: And What If She Screamed?

This is SUCH a clever concept. You've got a great, reflective writing style. I hope you continue naming your chapters in the same way you named this one.

And Ginny's one of my favorites too.

Author's Response: All of the chapters will be named similarly to this one I'm going to send a Neville Luna one to my beta next... won't tell you what it's called though! I'm posting a similar series of Draco/Hermione fics aswell... if you're interested! Romantic xx

Reviewer: sophis-reinis
Date: 11/30/09 19:01
Chapter: And What If She Screamed?

That was REALY good!!!

I like that Ginny was given a weak side. I haven't known anyone to do that, and you did it very well.

Author's Response: Thank you [: Romantic xx

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 11/30/09 0:18
Chapter: And What If She Screamed?

Wow. If the other one shots in this series will be just as good and emotional as this one, it should make for a very promising read. Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've got a few more that I need to send off to my beta already written (this was my favourite so I thought I'd post this first). I'm also doing a Dramione And What If...? series so keep your eyes peeled. Romantic xx

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 11/29/09 11:45
Chapter: And What If She Screamed?

awww :( poor ginny!! that is exactly how i would imagine ginny feeling, feeling like things are hopeless because if he died, she would die too. very well written! keep writing, i love this!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Keep your eyes peeled for the Dramione And What If...? series. Also thank you for being my first reviewer on MNFF. Romantic xx

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