Reviews For Perfect
Reviewer: Fred_Rocks29
Date: 02/09/11 12:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. I LOVE this!!! I never really thought about how Dean would feel when Ginny broke up with him... but you showed me perfectly in this fic!! Quite dark, but extremely well done :)

Reviewer: madhumakhi
Date: 11/21/09 9:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

It is very well written . Chilling to the core . Dean's vegenance and his desire to capture ginny , his only true love for the last time made it superlative . And the way she was murdered scared me da most .

Reviewer: TM_WandStick
Date: 11/18/09 20:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good. It's not what anyone would usually think of Dean, but you made it completely believable. I love how it was just Dean making a monologue--it was very creepy and gave it a really insane vibe. It was--well, I'm not going to say perfect now!

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 11/18/09 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was haunting. I never would have thought Dean capable of murder, and Ginny his victim no less...but you made it happen and I believed every word of it. You knew what you were doing; it was cold, clear writing about a cold, clear act. So terrible - but I couldn't stop reading. Really perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is kind of different from what I usually write, but I really enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing!

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