Reviewer: bluexroses
Date: 06/11/10 6:54
Chapter: Let Me Be Asleep Forever

You've got a wonderful style. The moment was executed quite nicely. I loved the progression through Draco's emotions and his thought process in writing the letter. That's difficult to capture properly, and you've done a good job. The end with Scorpius was, of course, very sweet, but personally, I thought it was slightly OOC. Perhaps it was just the use of "okay" as that's usually more of an American thing. Good story though :)

Reviewer: pictoluna
Date: 12/17/09 3:35
Chapter: Let Me Be Asleep Forever

the ending was very cute.

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 11/08/09 10:52
Chapter: Let Me Be Asleep Forever

that was very good and i liked it a lot! my favorite part was with scorpius... hes so cute! =D

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