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Name: bluexroses (Signed) · Date: 06/11/10 6:54 · For: Let Me Be Asleep Forever
You've got a wonderful style. The moment was executed quite nicely. I loved the progression through Draco's emotions and his thought process in writing the letter. That's difficult to capture properly, and you've done a good job. The end with Scorpius was, of course, very sweet, but personally, I thought it was slightly OOC. Perhaps it was just the use of "okay" as that's usually more of an American thing. Good story though :)

Name: pictoluna (Signed) · Date: 12/17/09 3:35 · For: Let Me Be Asleep Forever
the ending was very cute.

Name: The_Dream_Team (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 10:52 · For: Let Me Be Asleep Forever
that was very good and i liked it a lot! my favorite part was with scorpius... hes so cute! =D

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