Reviewer: locanena
Date: 11/20/09 3:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awe I like it.

Author's Response: :] Thank you. ~Lexi~

Reviewer: jaynefae
Date: 11/15/09 19:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it. The way Lilly speaks is exactly like a five year old, and my dad has said what Harry was thinking on parenting for himself more than once. It also raised questions on why we muggl es do what we do on All Hallows Eve. The way you write is captivating. I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you. I really wasn't sure if I wrote Lily's speech convincingly enough, so thank you for assuring me some more that it really sounded like a five year old. ~Lexi~

Reviewer: Virgil
Date: 11/14/09 15:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

The title of this fic caught my eye because I was a Muggle for Halloween (just to avoid spending money on a costume, but still) and I think it's really cute. A couple of minor grammatical mistakes - your vs. you're, etc. but overall *totally awesome*!

Author's Response: Thank you! I must have missed those errors; I'll have to go back and fix them. ~Lexi~

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