Russia! Oh, my God, that was...brilliant! Seriously, that's one of the best stories I've ever read; the OCs are just...perfect together, the interaction between them--especially Jake, Mia, and Ben--is amazingly written. I really loved this! {BeccA}
Author's Response: *squee* Oh I am so so so happy you liked it Becca! I don't know why I get so nervous when I see that I have reviews, they almost always end up positive! I am so glad that you liked my OCs interaction, coming from the Queen of OC interaction, that means a lot! Thankyou so much for the review, *huggles* Russia xxxxx
Author's Response: *squee* Oh I am so so so happy you liked it Becca! I don't know why I get so nervous when I see that I have reviews, they almost always end up positive! I am so glad that you liked my OCs interaction, coming from the Queen of OC interaction, that means a lot! Thankyou so much for the review, *huggles* Russia xxxxx
i loved it, Russia!
Author's Response: Awww, thankyou Andi! I am so glad you liked it! Russia xxxxx
Very good story line and nicely written too....It seems so real... Good work! Looking forward to see more of these. I would lobe to Beta your future stories
Author's Response: Thankyou for your review! I am so glad you enjoyed the story! I was aiming to make it seem as naturalistic as possible, so I am glad it came accros that way that for you. I should have some more fics up soon... look out for an update to my chaptered fic "Torn" it is a mystery too, and has a muggle as the main character, hopefully you will enjoy that! Thankyou again! Russia xxxxx
Hello! I guess I'm your first reviewer! I just read your story and I loved it! It was so cute! So typical of kids to wander into a haunted house or castle, in this case, Hogwarts!
I'm surprized thst the kids did'nt question about the castle...Being Muggles, I suppose they were frightened.
Once again, thank you for a wonderful tale!
Author's Response: Thankyou so much for your review! Hmm yeah, I thought they would question the castle, but it was really hard to get everything in. It was just getting so long. I'm considering re-working it after the challenge has been judged. Thankyou again for the review! Russia xxxxx
