hey, Ronnie! This story is really good. It's also very believable. I could imagine Peter doing that. And you got Gryff points, so great job! Back to the story. I think that the characterization of Peter is pretty good.
I'm sorry that I don't have much to say other than it was good. I hope you post more stories soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, Alyssa! Really! Ronnie