A very sweet poem! I really enjoyed it. You have a nice way with poetry, and I loved how you captured her emotion so well.
"you see that they’re meant to be."
I loved this characterization of Pansy, who sees that Draco made a good choice, but still longs for him to be with her. Sad, but sweet. Very nice job!
This will be very good for me, since I'm writing about how Astoria and Draco fell in love. I hate Pansy, but I did initially wonder why Draco decided against her when they seemed to be so together throughout the books. It just goes to show that almost nothing is ever simple!
I really love this poem. The ending is just great. It actually makes me feel sad for Pansy. I never thought that it was possible for that to happen, but it did. I think that this is a great poem. My favorite stanza is the fifth one. The last line in that stanza is just great.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the poem. :) ~M_W