This is so awesome!
Author's Response: Why, thank you! ;)
I think that this story is really great. I love Rita in this. She is extreemly believable in this. I think that this is a great reason why Rita isn't the best of people. I really hate Margaret. She's just not a nice person. I like the plot in this story. It is very good. It kept me entertained through out the whole story.
I think you did a great job on this story and I hope you win!
Author's Response: Hello Alyssa!
I love how your emotions came across in your review. :) I'm so glad that you thought Rita was believable, her story was believable and also that Margaret was just a detestable character generally. And THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD WISHES!