I loved your story!
Author's Response: thanks so much!!
wow...didn't expect that at all O.O
Author's Response: hope you liked it :)
I like it...the only problem is that I want more and that I want to know what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I promise I'm trying. I submitted it like, 8 times, but me and grammar, we don't along so great. I really need a beta reader... If you're one, or you know any..... it would help... a lot.... I'm really glad you like it though!
love it! plez update so that i may read it! cant wait to see what happens when they "die"
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Hopefully, if I can ever get it submitted (9th time's the charm?) you'll like it! Thanks for taking the time to review.
Now I just cant wait to see what happens next..
Hurry up =D
Author's Response: Well, good. I'm glad you liked it enough that it deserved 2 smileys. I'm working on it, I'm working on it.... English grammar is just so difficult... We should just fix it to make it apply to the same rules as spoken English.
It'll be very interesting to see what happens next...
Author's Response: It's been submitted. The chapter has been finished for a while, but I just can't seem to get it through. Hopefully it will with time! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Good first chapter! I'm itching to find out what happens next...
Author's Response: thanks for the review! i pretty much have the next chapter done, it just needs some tweaking. i hope to put it in sometime next week when school isnt so busy.