No! Did you have to kill everyone? Man, that was so sad!!! I must have burst into tears when I read that Luna was gone too, I love her to death, er, I love her dearly. Anyways, great chapter!
Hermione is losing her strength and that bothers me greatly. My only complaint, otherwise, a good chapter.
Geez, she just keeps going through it! I want my fighting, backtalking Hermione back!
Looks like things aren't going so well.
She's accepting this too much! My only complaint! Get it together, Hermione!
Argh!!! I'm still awake and i will read more!
O_O Good God! I have to read another chapter~!
Whew! I am going to read one more chapter darn you before going to bed!
Ugh, its so excellent that I'm reading another chapter! Darn you!
Damn. I am up at 4 am reading this darn you! one more chapter and I'm off to bed!
Man, I think I might have stopped breathing. RIP Neville!
this story is so different to others.
it has a different theme but it all molds into one perfect story.
thank you for writing this for us to enjoy!
Author's Response: :D I'm so happy everything flowed well. It was difficult to capture so much and make it cohesive, so it's a relief to hear that I did alright! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
Just Perferct. I don't think there are more words for this story. Loved it.
Author's Response: :D Thank you!!
wow i loved reading your story, it's like reading something that Ms. Rowling herself could have written! i especially love the part about blood tying the Malfoys and their spouses together, it fits so well i would have believed it if i didnt remind myself that this is a fanfiction, and i really like it that you showed Lucius Malfoy as having a heart; in many of the dramione fanfics he's ignored or shown as a heartless brute when it's hinted in the books that he's not. Thank you for writing this fantastic story and for sharing it! by the way, i always thought the word "shite" was spelled without the e at the end, is it just spelled differently in your country?
p.s. i made an account just to read this and "An Aversion to Change" lol
Author's Response: I'm from the U.S., so it's spelled "shit" here. One of the many Brit-picks I'm sure escaped my notice - sorry for the inconsistency!! But I'm so glad you liked my story, and I'm very flattered that you think so highly of my writing! JKR is one of my idols, so being compared to her is a true compliment. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
This was amazing!
I loved it!
Very nice ending. Open, but not too open. :)
This whole story has been great. Your writing style, the characters... It's all fantastic
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
I've been meaning to review for the past few chapters, but as soon as I get to the end of a chapter, I just go to the next. This is a really great story. Your writing style, your word choice, and even the characters (and the ones you've borrowed from Jo :D) are really dynamic. This is really fantastic.
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
First your an amazing writer! Second I am a strong believer that Harry should have died. If he died i wish it would have turned out like your story! Keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
I was impatient and migrated here to finish the story.
Wow just wow.
I was actually speechless, although the ending is well written I say the chapters before them are far more excellent. I was floored at the dialogues really. I like how the atmosphere loomed over up until the end.
I was actually sad, contented, happy, and grieving already that I finished reading it. (time check, 6 in the morning lol)
The ending could be more promising but I am satisfied. More power to you
Author's Response: I'll be making micro-edits while I post at H&V, so some things might change, but probably not. I'm glad you carried on with the story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Wow. All I have to say is WOW.
This story put me through so many emotions I can't even name them all. As I was reading the story my mom came in to find me balling my eyes out. Anway, here is my review.
My lord, was the beginning dark. It was depressing, drab, and heart wrenching. The perfect feelings for what was truly going on. The characters were subject to so much and with all their conflicting emotions I was still able to see the true feelings. Your emotional writing was absolutely flawless and made me feel every single emotion. At first I was a little disappointed you didn't do the changing of perspectives with Draco, but by the end I understood why and agreed with your choice.
As for writing style, boy have you changed. Since Aversion to Change your style really seems to have matured and was ten million times better than the first which in all honesty wasn't bad.
The storylines were very intricate and you could tell you had it all planned out which was very impressive. I know people were a little upset about Hermione leaving, but I don't understand how they could be. It makes perfect sense and anyone else in her position who was brave enough would do the same. The end was heartbreaking but in a happy way. I am glad they did end up together and showed small signs of hope for the future.
SO that seemed like a whole rant to the wonderfulness of the story but whatever. This story is 100 times better than its predecessor, which I very much enjoyed. I love your stories and really hope you continue to write whether it's Dramione, other fanfic, or your own originals. Thank you for this story.
Author's Response: Oooh I'm sorry! Ha, I always feel a weird sort of pride when I make a reviewer cry. It means I'm doing something right, in - again - a weird, twisted way. Hehe. And I'm so glad you think I've gotten better. I think I have, too. I grew up a lot between writing "Aversion" and this, both in age and maturity, and I know it shows. It's always tempting to go back and rewrite parts of "Aversion" and my other old stories... Maybe when I'm done with all my new stuff, lol. Thank you again for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it!!