Reviewer: locanena
Date: 11/11/09 0:56
Chapter: Waking Up

I love it

Author's Response: More is coming soon!!!

Reviewer: bagwell
Date: 11/06/09 21:14
Chapter: Careers and Confessions

Okay. I'm hoked. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: madhumakhi
Date: 11/05/09 23:05
Chapter: Waking Up

It's my pleasure 2 read such a well written story :)

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 11/03/09 15:12
Chapter: Careers and Confessions

omg. that was the perfect r/hr scene! you really did a great job of writing what they would say. great job, keep updating!!

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 11/03/09 11:17
Chapter: Careers and Confessions

Ah, it's about time Ron did something other than provoke Hermione. :D

I like the dynamics of how Ron was finally recognizing the shift in his feelings toward Hermione, even how they'd been there all along. Your portrayal of their exchange was good, and it makes one realize that Ron was destined to be with her from the first time on the train when she told him he had dirt on his nose.

All in all, very in-character and a good addition.


Reviewer: Yellow Luna
Date: 10/26/09 17:25
Chapter: The Harrowing History of Harry Potter

Write MORE.....

Reviewer: Lupin Lover
Date: 10/19/09 19:03
Chapter: The Harrowing History of Harry Potter

I really like this story. It goes along with what I was thinking,

Reviewer: homietwin
Date: 10/15/09 21:17
Chapter: The Harrowing History of Harry Potter

Your story is amazing! It is marvelous! I cant wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work and i hope to be able to read more soon!

Reviewer: potter 4life 101
Date: 10/13/09 19:59
Chapter: Waking Up

Great catch!
made me want to continue reading!

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 10/11/09 19:21
Chapter: The Harrowing History of Harry Potter

I'm liking what I'm reading so far. The character development, as you mentioned, is progressing nicely, and both Harry's doubts about his reception by the Weasleys and his troubled sleep/thoughts is extremely believable.

So far, so good!

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 10/10/09 19:03
Chapter: The Harrowing History of Harry Potter

yay!! u updated!! it was preety awesome... love how amazingly lovey-dovey ron ad hermione are.. nvr imagined them like that before. hopefull u update rlly soon!!

Author's Response: chapter 4 is in the queue!

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 10/10/09 11:56
Chapter: The Harrowing History of Harry Potter

love this story! please keep adding more!!!

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 10/09/09 20:39
Chapter: The Harrowing History of Harry Potter

What a delightful story!

I enjoy the stories that take place immediately after the battle, but I have trouble finding ones that aren't Harry and Ginny throwing themselves at each other, declaring their undying love and know. ;) Or something like that. Or else they are brilliant one-shots. But chaptered fics that really explore the rebuilding of the wizarding world and the character development...those are the rare ones.

I'm not sure how I missed the first two chapters, because I would have been all over this, but I will be following this one, dear.

I thought Harry was pretty much on point...though I'm not sure he'd cry so much from happiness. At this point, he might, though. And I am conflicted as to whether I believe that they would ever tell anyone about the Horcruxes, for safety's sake. But their reasoning about Voldemort's body - very interesting.

Ron and Hermione are too cute - not overly so, but it is obvious that they seem to have crossed some barrier that they just couldn't get over before. And the nightmares are something that I agree that Harry would deal, at least for a while.


Author's Response: Thank you! The horcrux story reveal came out of my head because I had a hard time believing that everyone would have just let them off with "sorry we can't tell you" for very long. Plus, it was a small group of people, all of whom would never think about going as far as Voldemort had. I appreciate the feedback, all of this helps me look at the rest of the story to make sure it flows nicely. I too wanted a "after the war" detail story. I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Yellow Luna
Date: 09/27/09 11:46
Chapter: Appearances

Write more!

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 09/20/09 19:23
Chapter: Waking Up

UUUGGGGHHH. AMAZING SO FAR! I love it. cant wait for the rest. UPDATE.UPDATE.UPDATE!

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback!!! It's coming..more is coming I promise!

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 09/20/09 19:23
Chapter: Waking Up

UUUGGGGHHH. AMAZING SO FAR! I love it. cant wait for the rest. UPDATE.UPDATE.UPDATE!

Reviewer: mindora96
Date: 09/17/09 9:02
Chapter: Waking Up

keep on going!!it has a good plot.but why is it rated professors??

Author's Response: that will come up later...since it's a romance and it's planned to span through a few engagements there is some professors material that will come up later

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/16/09 20:12
Chapter: Waking Up

oooooo, amazing!! keep writing!!!!!

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