Very nicely done. One of the better fanfics for keeping to the honesty of the character. You are very articulate and easily conveyed your thoughts. I can't wait to read the rest
I REALLY LOOVE IT!
WOW! So far your story is really good! Your story is just how I imagined it would be if the books were continude! I just have one hint though, you need some action. Some sort of duel or battle! Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
wow awesome fanfic, when do you think the next chapter will be ready?
Will we never find out what happens? Sadness! I love this story!
I just finished reading all of your chapters and I cant wait for more! This is fantastic work and I'm addicted! Cant wait for you to post more!
omg sooo good?! are you writing more?
Excellent story, one of the best I've read for fan fictions. I can totally see all the characters speaking that dialogue. Are you still writing this, because I see the last time you updated was in February. Happy writing!
put in some romance
I normally lurk in silence on here, but I just found this (I know) and I wanted to tell you how simply fantastic this fic is.
It is probably not only one of the best HP fanfics I've read, but possibly one of the best fanfics I've read across multiple fandoms.
Your characterisations are spot on, your new characters have depht and frankly some brilliant names. You're pacing is great and plot is very believable.
So, absolutely brilliant, and I'm going to wait patiently for the next chapter :D
THIS. IS. UH-MAY-ZING!!!!
Keep up the good work!
I especially love your writing style..
Most people have a good plot, but are crappy writers. You have both!
Oh My God, i just got on this site and found your story and its really, really good, please write more, i am so excited to know what happens next
this is a really good story. i was wondering if u havd any plans to update soon
fantastic fanfic, i could almost swear that is canon
This is by far one of the best fanfics on the site so far... I am completely absorbed in the story! Please, update more chapters soon! I need to know what happens next!
I'm reveiwing for chpts. 2-12. This story is really good. You should have Harry tell Ginny about how Snape felt about Lily. She might be confused as to why he suddenly stopped the punishment and how he tried to give them lighter, yet subtle punishments.
I have always been trying to imagine what would have happened after the battle...this is good, better than i could ever do.
OMG... This is a great story!
Love! Love! Love!
i luv this!