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Name: hermy008 (Signed) · Date: 06/15/10 22:50 · For: Chapter 1
wow, i know you have heard this before, but i made an account just to review this fanfic. im relatively new to reading fanfic, and when i read this, i was totally blown away. even though i have looked at other fanfic, your story seemed a step above the others i've read. you really get the characters, their actions, emotions, even what they say, yet what their internal dialogue is equally important in this story as well. you captured the very essence of ron and hermione's relationship, and you didn't stretch it any farther than it should have gone... and you still stayed loyal to the context of dh. phenomenal job, this might get me interested to write my own. (i had started reading the first few chapters earlier, and when i realized i had accidently skipped over the last 2 chapters, you have no idea how happy i was to find our there was more :) ) thank you for writing this!

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much for the kind words, and for taking the time to register and leave a review. I simply love Deathly Hallows and my favorite thing is trying to imagine some of the things we don't get to see up close... like this bit. I hope you do decide to write something yourself. I have found a lot of enjoyment in writing fanfic, and its the best HP fix ever! Thanks again!

Name: harrypottergurl (Signed) · Date: 05/05/10 21:05 · For: Chapter 7
That was very good. I almost cried when Ron finally told Hermione. Thanks for writing that.

Author's Response: You're very welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Name: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: 05/01/10 16:12 · For: Chapter 7
Great job! Amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: EmotionalTeaspoon (Signed) · Date: 05/01/10 15:52 · For: Chapter 1
Awe! I loved this! I love stories mostly from Ron's point of view, strangely. I love Ron's whole confession of his love, it had everything I thought she should have told her. Lovely story!

Author's Response: Thanks... Ron is my favorite as well.

Name: chocolatehedwig (Signed) · Date: 04/29/10 17:34 · For: Chapter 7
Absolutley brilliant, I hung onto every word!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. That makes my evening. :)

Name: Elpeciss (Signed) · Date: 04/11/10 15:31 · For: Chapter 2
Very emotional. Great job so far!

Author's Response: Glad you like it so far...

Name: violentlibrarian (Signed) · Date: 04/09/10 15:45 · For: Chapter 7
That was awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: kayle2010 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/10 1:14 · For: Chapter 1
WOW! I love this. I just love this entire story. I like how you made it so tender, therefore making it so romantic. Amazingly written!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. Cheers!

Name: Equinox Chick (Signed) · Date: 04/03/10 10:32 · For: Chapter 2
Me again. Oh, what an intense chapter. Poor Ron, the feelings he must have been experiencing when Hermione was going through all of that. Wow! I just think you portrayed that superbly. You have a good gift for description and atmosphere, Lori. It's something I'm not good at, so I notice it in others work.

The other thing I wanted to compliment you on was the scene with Bill and Hermione, because I thought that was wonderfully judged. Bill's realisation that Ron isn't a baby, and Hermione trying to reassure Bill that Ron tried his best. It brought a lump to my throat.

Umm, I have a nit pick, and I feel really miserly for saying this because it's such a great story, but I'm not sure Ron would have been able to talk properly if his jaw had been broken. *slinks away as does feel mean for mentioneing it*

Lovely chapter ~Carole~

Author's Response: I love bringing lumps to peoples' throats. ;) Thanks for saying that, Carole. I had not originally intended to include any of that with Bill at all, but it sort of happened, and then he just wouldn't go away... hence, the conversation with Fleur and Hermione as well. Oh my goodness! How do I have 60-some reviews and no one has even caught that before now? I laughed out loud when I read it! You are totally right, and I'm thinking hard what to do. I'm not sure if you read any more, but if you do, you will soon see that I need that broken jaw very badly for about three more chapters... haha! Maybe I could down-play it a bit with his reaction to Bill and it could just be that his face is somehow injured from the blows he took at capture? Hmm... I will definitely give this some thought, and I know I will eventually make some edits to correct (or at least, smooth over) this faux pas. Thanks so much for pointing it out. Until I make some corrections, you will have to suspend your disbelief, as my Ron will continue to be quite verbose for the rest of this story. :) (What pain he must be in!) Ha! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Carole! I was really tickled to see you here.

Name: Equinox Chick (Signed) · Date: 04/03/10 8:46 · For: Chapter 1
OOOH, Lori. Now, someone should explain to me why I haven't read this before. I kept meaning to, but hadn't. Anyway, I'm here now. What can I say? The writing is effortless, yet very powerful. I love the attention to detail (he hair smelling of blood and shampoo - excellent) and you can really see why this couple are meant to be a pair. JKR was right (but we know that, don't we?)

Author's Response: Yay, Carole, what a nice surprise to find you here! We definitely do know about R/Hr... my OTP for sure! Thanks!

Name: acciolove (Signed) · Date: 03/30/10 15:07 · For: Chapter 6
this was the best ron/hermione fan fiction i've ever read, it was so beautiful, and it totally summed up rons feelings for hermione, i wish this really happened, because god knows i was waiting for ron to finally tell hermione how he feels! i loved it!

Author's Response: I know! Me, too! But we'll just have to be happy with page 625 and live out our fantasies in fanfiction, won't we? Hehe... thanks so much for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it!

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 02/19/10 19:37 · For: Chapter 7

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: TheNargelsApproaching (Signed) · Date: 01/19/10 15:39 · For: Chapter 1
Wow, that was just.. well brilliant! I registered only to leave you a comment here, telling you how much I enjoyed myself while I was reading it!! I cried, and laughed and held my breath. You really did manage to keep the characters, it all seemed very genuine, and for that I can only take my hat of.. Please keep writing, for I really liked how you were able to put this together, one rally cannot say less than brilliant, for it really was. Thanks !!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much. I'm glad you liked it. I definitely am still writing, though I expect it will be ages before anything is worthy of being read. Haha. Hopefully you'll still be around (and already registered!) when that day arrives. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Name: adeebee10 (Signed) · Date: 01/13/10 22:10 · For: Chapter 2
This made me cry! Really, really well written.

Author's Response: I love making people cry. ;) Just kidding. Thanks though... I'm thrilled you liked it.

Name: Rose Molly Weasley (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 20:22 · For: Chapter 7
Excellent Story. It is abundantly clear that you understand the complexity of these characters, especially Ron, who I think isn't given enough credit for how much he grew up in the last two books.
I think everyone has always suspected that *something* transpired between Ron and Hermione while they stayed at Shell Cottage, but I must say that this exposition very much exceeded my expectations.
I do hope you keep writing! May I suggest a follow-up to this that finds Ron and Hermione together after the last Battle?

Author's Response: Thanks so much; I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Obviously I'm the queen of wonderers when it comes to Shell Cottage. Someday maybe Jo will tell us what really went on in the house while Harry was dealing with Dobby. Until then, my imagination did what it did. :) Thanks for taking time to leave a review... I appreciate it.

Name: warlocklover4ever (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 15:40 · For: Chapter 7
OMH!!!!!!!!!! I just read that whole thing! BEST. HERMIONE & RON FAN-FICTION. EVER. You are an amazing writer! Thank you for posting this!!!!!!! U R AWESOME!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! :) Thanks for taking time to leave a review... I'm so glad you liked it.

Name: lucygirljb (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 22:34 · For: Chapter 1
You did an awesome job with this story! The missing moments are the best moments. The Yule Ball line was beyond perfect - exactly how Ron would start that conversation. I loved the bits between Bill and Ron - how concerned Bill was for his brother and showing how Ron had really grown up.
One of my absolute favorite fanfics!
Thanks- keep writing!

Author's Response: That is such a nice thing to say. I'm glad you like the stuff with Bill.... to be honest, I'm not as comfortable with his character as I am with Ron, and so am always a little relieved to hear someone say it seemed all right. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. :)

Name: AllyLovesHP (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 3:00 · For: Chapter 1
Needless to say, I created an account just so I could leave a review for this story. I've read a lot of fan fiction, and I have to say that this story is up there with the ones I enjoyed the most. Speaking as someone who has taken creative writing courses, I have to say you have wonderful prose! What I liked is that this is a fiction that doesn't just tell a new spin on a favourite story, but also does so very poetically. You are very talented. I thought you stayed very consistent with the characters, which is important with fan fiction. I also loved the line about Hermione not seeing Harry because he always stood next to Ron. My fave part, however was the way in which Ron first told Hermione how he felt. "I should have asked you to the Yule Ball." Such a typical Ron thing to say, a way to avoid what he has to say until he can find a way to say the words, and it was also so definitive of their relationship over the years, all starting with that one incident. It was perfectly fitting of Ron and Hermione! I loved the entire story of course...it made me want to re-read Deathly Hallows again! I hope you continue to write.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to register and leave this review. You really made my day. I think it is so cool that you liked the Yule Ball line. No one has really mentioned that, but it was really the first line I had for those last three chapters (originally this fic was only going to lead up to the point where Ron went out to help Harry dig), and the reason I started thinking about what it might be like if they had gotten together at Shell Cottage... who would have initiated it and what might have been said. And that line just kept coming back to me. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I will certainly keep writing. Definitely reread Deathly Hallows... it is my favorite! Thanks again!

Name: HiddenVixen (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 12:52 · For: Chapter 7
Very well written~I enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: lestrangea (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 4:29 · For: Chapter 7
i know this is probably cliche but I love it and more fanfic please...

Author's Response: This is cliche too: thanks so much for reviewing. I'm thrilled you liked it. :)

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