It's nice. Though I think the introduction is too long, when Ron finds out what happens to Hermione, and the rest is a bit rushy. I was hoping it takes longer for her to remember things. The proposal is so fast.
The beginning was awesome, just too long in comparing to the rest of the events.
Author's Response: Thanks for the input! And yes yes, my endings do tend to rush, due to me wanting to finish/not knowing how to end it. I'm working on it.
I love this story !!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
i definitely did not see the memory loss plot thing coming! very interesting and sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks!
twilight fan much???? and yes, because i recognised it it does mean that i am too. it was corney in twilight and it was corney here! other than that i liked this chapter
Author's Response: I know it was corny lol. Couldn't resist though. Glad you liked it.
cute excited for next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 2 now up.