Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 09/18/09 22:11
Chapter: Chapter Two: Harry's Engagement

Wow! That was short and sweet! Or fast and furious!
I'm glad Harry proposed to Ginny, I know she'll say yes, after she gets over the initial shock of it all.
I hope Ginny does well in her summer courses with Harry being there too. They sure won't be able to concentrate, that's for sure! ;0)
Thanks for another great chapter, I look forward to reading more of the story.
Best of luck with the rest of the story!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 09/18/09 22:02
Chapter: Chapter One: Aftermath

A nice beginning...Hmm, I had forgot that Harry lost his broom, during the war...I think he did, anyway. Nice that he and Ginny can share time together after their sad day.
Harry had alot on his mind, after what he went through. No wonder he was so distraught. And have Ginny by his side is a great plus.
A nice story and I looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Good luck with the writing of this story! ;0)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 11:32
Chapter: Chapter Two: Harry's Engagement

OMG--That was incredible. I feel like crying--from happiness of course. Although that was a little mean of you to have Harry ask THE QUESTION and then end the chapter:) I'm happy Ginny will be joining the other three for a summer session. How are the four of them going to get any work done though? Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/09 11:17
Chapter: Chapter One: Aftermath

Excellent start to your book. It was sad but it gives the promise of a future. I liked that. I like when the characters pick themselves up and get on with their lives. I liked that Harry and Ginny could go out flying.

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