Reviews For Hermione
Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 09/16/09 5:34
Chapter: Chapter 3 Strange Behavior

OMG!!! Hermione telle Minnie and ooooh minnie displays her first bits of magic YAY!!!! Please update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: I am working on it, but it is lucky that this seems to be a story that is writing itself quite quickly!

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/13/09 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 3 Strange Behavior

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next now that Hermione told Minnie! And I'm glad Minnie's a witch too. I suspected as much.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and there will be many more chapters to come!

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/12/09 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 2 House Guest

“She’s British. It’s a culture thing.”
Anyways, I guess this is sibling jealousy, huh?!
By the way, I think Minnie is a lot funner than Hermione!

Author's Response: Yes, sibling rivalry comes in many forms. And poor Minnie is just so confused because she doesn't know what it is.

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/12/09 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 1 Wonthaggi, Victoria

Oh, did she Disapparate away? This is getting real interesting! So it's been all these years and the Wilkens still don't know they're Grangers and that Hermione 1 in their daughter too.

Author's Response: Yes, it was a very strong memory charm.

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/12/09 14:25
Chapter: Prologue Expecting…

Amazing! I am really going to enjoy reading this. Yay! Hermione has a baby sister.....named Hermione!
I kind of feel bad for her though. Has she tried reversing the memory charm yet or has it failed? I guess I'll find out. On to the next chapter.

Author's Response: To answer your question, yes, Hermione has tried to reverse the memory charm, but it is not an easy thing to do. You'll get more details of it all later in the story.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 09/12/09 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 2 House Guest

why did real Hermione come back, anyway? What's she gonna do? I still love this story though.


Author's Response: Well, she still has a great deal of love for her parents, and she wants them back again. But life has moved on without her and now she has to deal with it.

Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 09/12/09 3:40
Chapter: Chapter 2 House Guest

I have just started to read this story, i find it rather intriguing, i am gessing that for some reason Hermione either couldn't or chose not to remove the memory charm. Will she ever remove it?
I'm guessing that Mernione (big) is just a bit jealous of little hermione and that's why she's so short with her?
Will little hemione be a witch??

Author's Response: Well, keep in mind, memory charms are very strong spells and they aren't broken overnight. What would be the use in them if a Death Eater could just lift it so easily. It is a great effort to undo that kind of damage. And all siblings tend to be a little jealous when a new baby comes along, no matter how old they are when the baby is born. As to Little Hermione, you'll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 09/11/09 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 1 Wonthaggi, Victoria

AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW....Poor real Hermione...why did she even show up?

Author's Response: Well, she does love her parents. That's why she cast the spell on them in the first place; so they would be safe from the violence of the war. And now that all that's over, she wants them back again. But life has gone on without her.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 09/11/09 19:28
Chapter: Prologue Expecting…

AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW!!!! Poor Hermione! but who's the other Hermione gonna be? is it gonna be baby Hermione #2? Oh. wait. Duh.

She barely made any noise and her eyes remained shut tight against the Florissant lights.

"Florissant " Um. that is spelled wrong. Unless I'm being dumb and you spelled it like that on purpose. But isn't it Flourescent, or something like that?


Author's Response: Him, spellcheck said that was how it was spelled. I'll have to look it up.

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 09/07/09 21:10
Chapter: Chapter 1 Wonthaggi, Victoria

hmmm...very mysterious....Obviously, Hermioned Granger (Weasley) needed to remove the memory charms from her parents and never did....and they ended up having another baby...and named her Hermione as well....interesting...very interesting...Now Hermione (Weasley) is back...and young Hermione is curious...Look forward to an update :)

Author's Response: Yes, since they didn't know they already had a daughter named Hermione, and Monica Wilken's always loved the named, they saw no reason why they shouldn't name this baby Hermione as well. I hope you will keep reading future chapters of the story.

Reviewer: sorrow_of_severus
Date: 09/05/09 22:15
Chapter: Prologue Expecting…

What a neat premise, Molly! I've always thought that the idea that Hermione (Granger) would waltz in and fix her parents memories as easy as pie right after the end of DH was simplistic. It's fun to read about the similarities and differences between Hermione I and Hermione II. Right now, I'm guessing Hermione Wilkens seems to be perhaps more like her dad, and Hermione Granger more like her mum. Well, I can't wait to read more, that's for sure!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the idea for the story, and I hope you will read future chapters. I suppose I am writing Hermione I to take more after her mother and Hermione II to take after her father, but the idea for HermioneII's character actually came from an J.K. interview that I read. She said Hermione Granger was an exaggerated version of herself as a child, and I suppose that is what Hermione Wilkens is to me; a caricature of myself at ten years old.

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