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Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 03/02/10 8:24 · For: Chapter 6 The Last First Day of School

Author's Response: ThanX!

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 03/01/10 21:28 · For: Chapter 6 The Last First Day of School
Oh great, Hermione and Hermione are back!

BTW, the following sentence shows awkward signs of rewriting, you will want to fix it:
But instead of starting at the very beginning of the book, as Hermione usually went about reading, but instead found herself running her thumb across the pages, moving them like a flipbook, looking for something to catch her eye.

Instead of "but instead found herself" you probably wanted to say "she found herself ... instead"

Author's Response: Thank you! I will change it right away.

Name: AReader (Signed) · Date: 02/26/10 15:33 · For: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions

Author's Response: Don't you worry! Chapter 6 is in the queue, and will hopefully be validated any day now. Chapter 7 is one it's way to the wings, and I am not afraid to say it was probably my favorite chapter to write.

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 01/16/10 17:41 · For: Prologue Expecting…
Pleas, pleaseplease, update this and SKAToM.

Author's Response: Let me assure you, I am working my way through the chapters as best I can.

Name: roseweasly (Signed) · Date: 12/04/09 7:44 · For: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions
this is really good i relly want to know more pls contiue it

Author's Response: Don't worry, I have no plans on abandoning this story.

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 18:47 · For: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions
uh, I loved it! I liked how there relationship was ... growing, without Hermione even realizing, really. And how they are similar, even when they are so different... I loved it! Can't wait for an update! Oh, and some typos...
-placed on them on them only (repeated 'on them')

Author's Response: My goodness, I am getting reviews all over the place. And I will fix that typo straight away!

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 14:53 · For: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions
I just discovered this story, and while others have written about Hermoine lifting her memory charm, yours is the best story with that premise so far. And two Hermoines ROTFL!

Keep it up (and don't abandon the Skat Hatokha story of yours, either)

Author's Response: Don't worry. The one thing you gotta love about the winter holidays is that you have endless time to write (even if it is on a napkin while you boss isn't looking.

Name: Saif (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 12:51 · For: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions
What a beautifully written sequence of events which helped them become that much closer!

It was nice to see an update after some time.

Minnie's friends sounded interesting, it's nice to see some new characters introduced every once in a while, it freshens things up.

I hope to see some real progress with the memory charms soon. At least Hermione doesn't have to share that terrible burden alone.

You know, I really want this story to go on for as long as it can, I've absolutely fallen in love with Minnie's character. She's so adorable and has that childlike innocence. I really hope Hogwarts takes her.

The part about Snape was really well-written as well. I still feel sad sometimes, he was a true hero but nobody knew that during his lifetime.

Anyway, really looking forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: You have certainly become a very loyal fan, haven't you? I fall in love with all the characters I create, but I am glad the Minnie has found a place in peoples' hearts. And don't worry, I am, in no way, done with this story yet.

Name: evilsamipoo (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 22:56 · For: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions
This is amazing! I don't normally read on MuggleNet but this intrigued me and I actually started an account to follow it! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Wow! I feel very honored that my story brought a new member into the MNFF community.

Name: chickonsticks (Signed) · Date: 12/01/09 16:02 · For: Chapter 5 An Infinite Ability to Ask Questions
Yeah, I was so excited to see another chapter posted. Can't wait to see what happens when Hermione's parents eventually get their memories back.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you will continue to read and review.

Name: dreamy_luna (Signed) · Date: 11/29/09 20:53 · For: Chapter 4 Truth Be Told
Ohhhhh..... This is awesome! I love your take on how Hermione goes back to her parents! I can't wait to find out how she and Minnie remove the spell!!!! Update soon!!!!!! Please!!!!!

Author's Response: Don't worry. I have chapter 5 in the queue, and hopefully it will be up very soon.

Name: saskiam (Signed) · Date: 11/21/09 18:27 · For: Prologue Expecting…
Please update? Oh please?

Author's Response: Well, you just got one today.

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 11/15/09 0:00 · For: Chapter 2 House Guest
gee, was I glad when Minnie became Minnie XD

Author's Response: Well, that was mostly for my own sake. I had to make sure to introduce the nickname in the first chapter, because I can not imagine going through an entire story trying to tell the difference between the two Hermiones!

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 11/14/09 23:20 · For: Chapter 1 Wonthaggi, Victoria
I loved it! HIHI. But why would Hermione wait ten years to return to Australia? her parents missed her wedding, she didn't see them for ten years...! Why? And here: but Hermione could still tell what it was. Shouldn't it be ...could still NOt tell... or COULDN'T tell...

Author's Response: I shall change that straight away!

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 11/13/09 22:03 · For: Prologue Expecting…
uh, I loved it! It wasn't the typical "hermione rushes off to Australia, removes the memory charm, parents angry but calm down, happy ending' you know? i've always thought this looked good, so here I am, reading it :D Don't disappoint! JK I'm sure you wont.

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel like if that was all she did, why did she even bother erasing her parents' memories? If it were that easy, why didn't she just tell them to run to Australia? Besides, Minnie made her presence very loud, and there was no chance of ignoring her.

Name: saskiam (Signed) · Date: 10/09/09 20:54 · For: Prologue Expecting…
I love this story! It's fantastically well-written, interesting, and above all UNIQUE, which is difficult enough to come by these days. :) I really think you need to update -- I've been checking every few days or so... though no matter how long you need to write that well is just fine, of course. :)

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for the praise, and I assure you, chapter five is nearly done and you should see it very soon.

Name: Hermiones_Therapist (Signed) · Date: 09/20/09 15:20 · For: Chapter 4 Truth Be Told
hahaha. I love MInnie.

Author's Response: Yes, I am rather fond of her as well. She is actually a caricature of myself at ten, the way J.K. has said Hermione was a caricature of her.

Name: Hermiones_Therapist (Signed) · Date: 09/20/09 14:55 · For: Chapter 3 Strange Behavior

Yeesh, sorry it took me so long to review this.

but ANYwho,

I love this story so much! and I love your characterization of Minnie, and older Hermione.


Author's Response: Well, I loves reviews no matter when they come. I'm glad you're liking the story.

Name: Saif (Signed) · Date: 09/17/09 19:30 · For: Chapter 4 Truth Be Told
(that was a horribly unintentional pun!)
...and a hilarious one too!

Gosh! As this story progresses, I'm starting to enjoy reading Minnie more and more! And starting to imagine things happened exactly like you've written!

Wizarding school in Australia...I'd rather Minnie went to Hogwarts, she'd probably be in Rose's ye - wait, I would imagine Rose and Hugo are still toddlers at this point.

I hope they'll be able to lift the memory charms but I guess it'll be a challenge.

Author's Response: Well, it makes me really happy to hear how the story is coming to life for you. Also, I suppose since Minnie's parents are British citizens and her older sister is an alumnist of Hogwarts, she might be one of the rare exceptions to overseas students, though I was rather looking forward to creating an Australian wizarding school. And yes, Rose and Hugo are quite a bit younger than their Aunt Minnie. Remember the photo Hermione showed in chapter two: Rose was two years old and Hugo a few months old. To give a clearer picture, Minnie is about six months younger than Teddy; she was born in October just after the Second War.

Name: hpcrazy2011 (Signed) · Date: 09/17/09 19:22 · For: Chapter 4 Truth Be Told
loving the story...this is amazing

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you like it, and I am writing chapters as fast as I can.

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