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Name: kail420 (Signed) · Date: 02/02/14 3:18 · For: Chapter 6 The Last First Day of School
great concept. interaction between the two Hermionie's is quite good.

Name: CountryCutie112 (Signed) · Date: 01/28/11 21:58 · For: Chapter 9 The International Floo Network

Author's Response: I promise that I am indeed working on it. I have it planned out and all that's left to do it write it.

Name: cg_123 (Signed) · Date: 01/16/11 17:41 · For: Prologue Expecting…
I really enjoyed this story ! Can't wait for the next chapter ! lol

Author's Response: Well, I promise I am hard at work, but all those Weasleys are hard to get just right.

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 10/10/10 8:18 · For: Prologue Expecting…
This last chapter added an interesting twist, an intermezzo of sorts, to the story. But pray, tell, is she finally going to more forward on restoring her parents memories?That surely will allow for many humorous moments, too. And Minnie soon has to decide where to go to school to. Please don't let us wait too long to find out.

Author's Response: All shall be revealed in due time...*mysterious fade off*

Name: tilli (Signed) · Date: 09/27/10 12:42 · For: Chapter 2 House Guest
why is our Hermione being so mean to little Hermione...?

Author's Response: Well, Minnie HAS essentially taken Hermione's place. Can't really blame her.

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 09/23/10 12:24 · For: Chapter 9 The International Floo Network
Hurray! You updated! I love it! Curious to see if this great plan actually works!

Author's Response: Well, I hope you'll continue to read!

Name: mjc (Signed) · Date: 09/23/10 9:33 · For: Chapter 9 The International Floo Network
Lovin' it.

Cornish Pixies on crack...(well, cocaine...) now there's a scary thought.

I also really enjoy the subtle pokes at all the Snape/Hermione stories around...

Author's Response: Ha ha! Inuendo makes everything funny!

Name: Simply Being (Signed) · Date: 09/09/10 17:25 · For: Prologue Expecting…
Hello, here is your Ravenclaw Review Circle review!

I love this topic. I think it's wonderful when authors choose small but significant moments in the book to expound upon. I particularly liked how you established a contrast between the upbeat tone of the story and the fact that readers know what is really occurring. I think this renders the story even more poignant. For example: Wendell put his hands on Hermione’s shoulders. “And if Little Hermione could turn out to be half as amazing of a person as you are, I think I would probably be the proudest father on the face of the earth.”

I love the dichotomy between Wendell’s cheerful attitude and the true significance of what he is saying. Another great example is:
This time, the experience was completely unique, fresh, and new.

This statement manages to be both hopeful and heartbreaking. Great job!

I also enjoyed how you revealed that a baby was to be born—it truly surprised me, but it makes sense within the context of the story.

Another strength is the subtle moments where you revealed Hermione’s ulterior moments—and her pain. Her subtle references her childhood, leaving when the baby was born…etc were all very skillfully done. If I were writing this fic I would probably have written it from Hermione’s point of view, but your choice makes it much more intriguing. And speaking of Hermione, I your characterization was very faithful to the books. I particularly liked this:

Those times dealing with Monica’s pregnancy seemed to be the only time Hermione appeared flustered in any way, and it seemed to be a great distress to her to appear imperfect in any way.

But Wendell actually found it rather cute. It showed that the great Hermione Granger was human after all, and frankly, made her a lot easier to love.

Overall, great start to a very intriguing story!


Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! The Ravenclaw Review Circle is such fun!

Name: AReader (Signed) · Date: 07/12/10 14:45 · For: Chapter 8 Uncle Marty
gret story plz update of than!

Author's Response: A secret code! Could it be Sanskirt? I must decipher it!

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 07/12/10 8:02 · For: Chapter 8 Uncle Marty
Uncle Marty?!Wickedly creative. But, this very much looks like a non canonical twist. After all, the Ministry constantly sent Obliviators around, and it was never that grave to slip up and reveal something, as long as the Ministry cold mop up. That is what Arthur Weasly did much of the time, at least after his promotion.

Or is there something more sinister behind Uncle Marty?

Please don't let us wait that long until the next update!

Author's Response: Well, Uncle Marty has a very unique job because this is a very unique situation. His job is to keep constant tabs on Minnie's family, to make sure the charm isn't wearing off so they don't remember parts of the wizarding world before they remember not to go around telling everyone. I don't imagine something like all this happens very often, so there isn't a set procedure.

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 07/12/10 7:39 · For: Chapter 8 Uncle Marty
LOL! Glad for the update! Can't wait for more! Hermoine vs Hermione is hilarious! When will Ron visit with the kids? She's been gone a long time!

Author's Response: That will occure next chapter. I hope you will review that one as well.

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 07/04/10 9:46 · For: Prologue Expecting…

Any news here? Minnie is soon going to school, but she didn't finish shopping yet, so what's up next? Please, update.

Author's Response: You will see very soon, as soon as I hear back from my beta.

Name: the bushy haired know-it-all (Signed) · Date: 05/11/10 15:39 · For: Chapter 7 Sydney
Great! loved it!

Author's Response: I am glad!

Name: Vongchild (Signed) · Date: 05/11/10 14:42 · For: Chapter 7 Sydney
I just read the whole thing today and wanted you to know that I think it's really great! I am so, so looking forward to what's in store for Minnie!

Author's Response: Well, there is indeed a lot in store for Minnie!

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 05/11/10 10:37 · For: Chapter 7 Sydney
:) GREAT! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Well, I is working on it!

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 05/11/10 9:34 · For: Prologue Expecting…
What a great chapter. The detailed portrayal of the wizarding market is great, and we are as clueless as they were without a compass, as to what is happening next with Minnie. Aussie or British school? When will their parents finally get their memory back? And how will they return without being seen by the parents? Aparition outside the home?

Keep the updates up!

Author's Response: Well, the only way to come up with the answers is to read the rest of the story!

Name: potterchassid (Signed) · Date: 04/19/10 10:32 · For: Prologue Expecting…
You haven't updated in a little while. Can we expect a new chapter soon? We want to hear from Hermione & Hermione! (also, can you please continue your SHAM story?)

Author's Response: Believe me when I say I have been working very diligently on chapter seven, but it has been a very stubborn one. I have even started writing the next chapters in the story while I wait. But I'm in the last 1000-word leg, and I hope it will be done soon.

Name: i_exist (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 12:34 · For: Chapter 6 The Last First Day of School
Wow! I have really enjoyed reading what you've written so far! It was lovely and Hermione was in character and everything! I hope you update this soon and I can't wait to see more of your amazing work. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Well, chapter 7 is one I really enjoyed writing, and I hope you will love reading it.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 03/03/10 11:25 · For: Chapter 6 The Last First Day of School
I enjoyed reading this story. Little Minnie is nothing like her big sister. She is a delightful character. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: I am glad you like the story, and I am working hard on continuing it.

Name: dominiqueweasley (Signed) · Date: 03/02/10 23:41 · For: Chapter 6 The Last First Day of School
:) I like this chapter a lot, can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: I'm working hard on chapter 7 right now!

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