Interesting story and quite well written. I'd very much like to read much more about how these two will try to get along. I only wonder... maybe Cassi could have been put up in some other room. I bet Grimmsuld place has at least obe guest room she could use...
Also, Lily's reaction was massive! I liked the way she seems hell bent not to like Cassi not even by mistake! While Cassi seems too deeply sad by her parents and brother's absence... poor child!!
Keep the chaps coming!! I wonder if we're going to see some Weasley friend's interaction? Will Hugo come play with Lily or perhaps... Bill and Fleurs' kiddies? Great fic!! ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The reason I put Cassi in the same room as Lily was mostly to provoke Lily's temper and give her one more thing to be furious about. I don't know if I'll bring in the Weasleys, since nobody is supposed to know where Cassi is. Thanks again!
Ah, I remember reading the first chapter of this waaaaaaaaaaay back when it was first produced. I'm actually very interested to see where Cassi goes from here and why Draco and Astoria had to leave their daughter with, of all people, the Potters.
Your stories were rejected? Perhaps you should seek out a Beta to look for the things you missed. I reread everything I write three times, and I still manage to miss things like using the same word too frequently or starting paragraphs with the character's name too often. Just a thought to help you on your way, since, so far, I really like your idea.
Well, keep on truckin', and I look forward to further installments.
~Jess
Author's Response: yeah, kinda forgot about it.... sorry *blushes* thank you so much for your advice, I really need it since I'm just starting. :)
lol, i like this story. (: i like the idea of the potters having a lot of pictures, lily being lily (although we don't really know much about lily...) ... so why are the malfoys hiding? and do ginny or harry mind watchin cassi (nice name, btw)?
this is going to be interesting....
Author's Response: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't been on, i didn't think they'd publish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!! i don't know why they're hiding quite yet, not entirely, anyway. it's something to do with the remaining Death Eaters.
