Wow I really love this; it's such a beautifully captured moment in Harry's life post-Hogwarts. Your writing is very realistic and well-written, keep it up!
This story is very sweet! I love how you stay true to Harry's Character! He is such a genuinely good guy! You don't find many like him!
I really like this. You should write more.
Absolutely adorable! Looking forward to more.
This is your first fiction? REALLY?
Well, it rocked. :-)
I lllllove your characterization of Harry, and the way he explains Voldemort to Lily.
And I feel the exact same way about hot chocolate.
awww..sweet story! :)
This was bloody brilliant for a first fiction! I had trouble going over things like 'Gin' and incredibly exceptional wandless magic skills, but the narration had far more high points for those to bother me much. I liked the individual importance and details you gave to each of Harry's kids. And I loved how you ended the story. The dynamics between the characters was well-written. Looking forward to more from you. You certainly nailed this one.