Reviewer: Maryx3
Date: 09/27/09 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 1: Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy

I would post at this fansite: http://fanfic.potterish.com/
It's very popular here :P

Reviewer: Maryx3
Date: 09/26/09 23:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy

Man, that's really, REALLY funny.
I would like to know if I can translate it into brazilian portuguese, I guess brazilians would like it, too...
My problem is SPEAKING and WRITING english, but translating I'm fine, I guess :P
So... can I translate it? Do I have your permission? :P

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I'm really glad you like it. Where would you translate it though? Where would you post it?

Reviewer: stark40763
Date: 09/16/09 12:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy

I wonder what Ernie Macmillan would do if his son ended up as a Slytherin? Hopefully Scorpius gets over his drooling though...

Author's Response: Ah poor Ernie, i think Henry just got the bad side of his pompousness... and Scorpius, well, unfortunately even in the wizarding world, not everything can be cured. Thanks a lot for reviewing. Reviews mean a lot to us, whether telling us that you enjoyed it, providing interesting comments, or giving us constructive critisism. Once again, thanks!!!!!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 09/15/09 23:28
Chapter: Chapter 2: Ravenclaw

Once again, another amusing chapter! Ptrofessor Flitwick doing a rap was a hoot! At least Albus and Rose are in Gryffindor, and Scorpius is in Ravenclaw, interesting....
The sorting was fun to read. All in all a great story!
Can't wait to find out who the hooded stranger is...
Good luck writing the rest of the story! ;0)

Author's Response: Again, thanks for the review! Don't worry, you'll find out who the hooded stranger is... or will you? Dun dun dun... Yeah, I've always thought it was kinda stupid that all the good main MAIN characters were in Gryffindor. That really makes no sense. And I hoped this would reflect the inter-house unity that has developed since the war. And I know that sometimes with these mugglenet stories, the whole story doesn't end up being posted, but we have finished both this book and the next one, so we just need to edit and post, so please keep following!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 09/15/09 22:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy

Very nice! I recognized the lines between Macmillon, and Albus, as the ones between Harry and Draco. Very cute. I guess Henry is the 'Draco Malfoy' of this story. *grin*
I laughed aat Rose turning all shades of colors after learning that Scorpius made up spells over the summer. Very cute!
And the poor trolley lady, when Scorpius refused sweets from the trolley! I felt bad for her.
But bravo to Scorpius for turning his sandwiches into burritos. Um, I hope the had the window open in their compartment. *grins mischieviously*
BUt I do love tuna sandwiches, I guess they went bad not being in a cool place.
Anyway, thanks for a very cute story so far...

Author's Response: um... very CUTE? But really, that's a lot for your review!!!!!!!! I really glad you like the chapter! Yeah, and Henry is kind of like Draco Malfoy, although more pompous than sneering. Yeah, I love tuna too, but these ones were soggy and gross...

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/26/09 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy

The train left the station like a long scarlet snake leaving its burrow. Admittedly, the snake also looked as if it was smoking, because it was, after all, really a train, no matter how effective the simile was.

HILARIOUS.

She opened her mouth and spoke those sacred words that would change the course of history forever.

“Anything off the trolley, dears?”

lol.

okay, that was FUNNY. That squid has issues. And it was just hilarious that you gave Henry the speech Draco used in SS/PS. :D

Author's Response: Thanks muchly. It's a bit strange that people are finding the jokes I didn't think were so funny, so funny! And the squid... has more issues than you think...

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/26/09 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy

The train left the station like a long scarlet snake leaving its burrow. Admittedly, the snake also looked as if it was smoking, because it was, after all, really a train, no matter how effective the simile was.

HILARIOUS.

She opened her mouth and spoke those sacred words that would change the course of history forever.

“Anything off the trolley, dears?”

lol.

okay, that was FUNNY. That squid has issues. And it was just hilarious that you gave Henry the speech Draco used in SS/PS. :D

Author's Response: Thanks muchly. It's a bit strange that people are finding the jokes I didn't think were so funny, so funny! And the squid... has more issues than you think...

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 08/26/09 5:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy

“This is the first time in nineteen years that this has happened to me!”
Haha! I was laughing so much at this part and at the part where Henry kept saying 'don't say I didn't warn you'!
And I love burritos! I guess Scorpius does too!

Author's Response: First review! First review! =D I'm glad you enjoyed the story! More to come soon...

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