I love the story so far, it has made me laugh several times =) and I applaude the Year 1 reference in the last paragraph =P The only thing I wasn't too sure about was the fact that Harry gave up the Muggle part of his life completely, it doesn't seem right to me for some reason. Besides the fact that most grown men don't know a whole lot about cars anyway. Unless they're professionals or grew up around someone who was a mechanic, whether professionally or for leisure. Please update soon =) (and if you're suffering from writer's block, hope you get over it soon. they can be such pain in the necks)
- Alie V
Author's Response: Well, as far as Harry giving up his Muggle way of life, my thinking was always that Harry would associate being a Muggle with being unwanted and abused, where as in the wizarding world, he is beloved by many people and thought of as a hero. Not to mention he wasn't very old when he learned he was a wizard, so is exposure to Muggle culture and his previous attitudes towards Muggles would leave much less of an impression than Muggle-born children who came from loving homes. But that's just the way I saw it. It's open to interpretation.
this is an amazing first chapter!
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, I know I need to get inspired to write again.
Oh, this is awesome. Hurry up and write more!
Author's Response: I am doing my very best!
Is there a chapter 2 yet?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: I have many, many stories demanding attention. But hopefully how that I am on break from school, I can devote more time to writing.
This story is fun! I can't wait for an update!!! I love stories about the future generation :)
Author's Response: I hope you will continue to read and review.
Wow this is really good! i really like how rose was put in ravenclaw. rons reaction was good too. i cant wait to find out what happens in this fic so please, please, please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and if you really like the idea of Rose being put in Ravenclar, it also happens in my story, The Arcane ScoRA and the Wand of MacArt. In fact, that story is accuring at the same time as this one. I try to write my stories so they can all exist in the same universe. Many of my stories even have references to other stories on my page.
The remains of the Potter family cringed as a whole, however, when Uncle Ron tried to pull out onto the street and nearly hit an ambulance. And all the cars
behind him didn’t seem the least bit relieved that Uncle Ron hadn’t run the ambulance off the road, the way they all began honking madly.
Love the way this fits in with DH.
But for some reason, not one adult seemed willing to allude to the reason why.
The bag in Aunt Hermione’s hand was notably smaller and less of a strain to carry. This was something of a pattern everywhere the couple went, and Lily often wondered to herself how her aunt continued to pull it off again and again.
I love the way you keep alluding to DH in this story. :-)
This is an awesome chapter. I hope you update soon! :-)
Author's Response: You just won't rest until you review every chapter of every story I have ever written, have you? Well, I'm glad you enjoying this one as well and will continue to read the others I have.