Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/22/09 11:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Just a few nitpicks before I get to the good part >.

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 08/21/09 21:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very interesting. I'm trying to picture it. I like the touch of Draco telling Ginny all different sorts of things are the family motto, and I like "stun first, ask questions later."

Draco does not strike me as being terribly in character, but he does strike me as being probably nicer than he lets on. A nice story

Author's Response: Thank you. I can imagine Draco would go a little - er - creative, when it came to telling her what the family moto was.

Well, yes, I'd have to agree on Draco - there is a bit of backstory to get him like this (but then he IS married to Ginny) and I'm leaning heavily on his family loyalty from the books. So he would be nicer at home :)

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