Reviews For That Awful Boy
Reviewer: Theloonyhermione
Date: 07/05/12 18:11
Chapter: That Awful Boy

Good story, though I have one suggestion: Make the beginning of the story or the summary a bit clearer that the narrator is Petunia - I wasn't sure who was narrating until the third paragraph, where you mentioned Lily. Otherwise, good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I meant the beginning to be a little vague, though.

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 08/15/09 23:31
Chapter: That Awful Boy

I absolutely loved this one-shot. It really was believable as coming from Petunia, and it fit perfectly, although it's sad to see how Petunia and Lily's relationship end

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 08/15/09 15:53
Chapter: That Awful Boy

I really love this story. It really is great.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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