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Reviews For Beyond The Portal

Name: Liet Dumbledore (Signed) · Date: 04/16/13 20:29 · For: Counting Legs Part Two
This is amazing! I love this series. Are you going to continue writing in it?

Name: Saif (Signed) · Date: 09/21/09 17:24 · For: Counting Legs Part Two
Really enjoyed this! I wonder who the perp was.

And trust Remus to tell Tonks he was considering naming their daughter 'Arachne'!

Name: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer (Signed) · Date: 09/08/09 21:23 · For: Counting Legs Part One
uh, meanie! get updating!!!!
i was ever so sad when A Little More Time ended, so I am really glad you are writing this! I love it!!!!!!

Name: ProfPosky (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 14:37 · For: Family Ties

Name: MetamorphmagusLupin (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 13:34 · For: Counting Legs Part One
An acromantula in St. Mungo's and heading into the Muggle world! Oh my! Great bit of writing. I absolutely loved your description as Tonks changed her hair from purple to pink. It was very moving.

Just a little note. Watch your use of the word "passed". Sometimes you tend to use that spelling when you should be using "past". For example: She ran past the acromantula. Passed would be used if your were to say: The acromantula passed by their hiding place. So, just a little nitpicking. Overall, excellent story and I can not wait for an update!

Name: ron lover (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 8:46 · For: Counting Legs Part One
Wow, that was very unexpected. My favorite line is Where’s Hagrid when you need him? It made me spit out my hot chocolate because I laughed for a second. I love lines like that. I love Remus's emotions when he finds out that he is haveing a girl. I think you did a great job on that. I also lke Dora's replies to Remus when he tells her to leave. They were also good. I hope I find out what happens next soon because I like this story so far.

Name: Saif (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 7:59 · For: Counting Legs Part One
Awesome chapter! I wonder who that familiar person was. And an acromantula heading into Muggleland, definitely not good!

Name: Saif (Signed) · Date: 09/05/09 7:48 · For: Family Ties
OMG! I loved this! I'm a huge fan of A Little More Time and I'm so glad you're posting these!

Name: jediprankster (Signed) · Date: 08/17/09 0:59 · For: Family Ties
--But Easter was a break without boredom, a paired down version of the job he loved...-- I think you meant 'pared' down.

--she realised that yes, she had just used that term out loud to address a werewolf-- That was funny! Were I Remus, I probably would have wet myself in that situation. In fact, I may just have to use that myself since it's so obvious to refer to a werewolf as 'barking'.

I love this, but I have to ask, at the end where it said "THE END", does that mean this is a one-shot? I hope not. This is up to your usual high standard, and I would welcome another multi-chapter story.

Name: MetamorphmagusLupin (Signed) · Date: 08/16/09 0:55 · For: Family Ties
Brilliantly written. Honestly, though, I didn't expect any less from the writer of A Little More Time, my absolute favorite fan fic ever. Remus and Tonks are the best couple and you really have their personalities down so well. Should we be expecting more of these little snippets of their lives post-Portal? I sure hope so. I can't wait to meet the newest addition to the Lupin family. Please keep writing!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 08/15/09 23:03 · For: Family Ties
Fantastic! Funny. Perfect Remus and Tonks.

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 08/15/09 22:16 · For: Family Ties
Yea! So glad you are writing the rest of this story!

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/09 21:30 · For: Family Ties
aww!! what a great idea!! i'm so glad you decided to do a series of oneshots based off of a little more time! i'm looking forward to the next one! :)

Name: Luna_Lovegood11 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/09 11:58 · For: Family Ties
This makes me oh so very happy.

Loved it. ^.^

Name: Equinox Chick (Signed) · Date: 08/15/09 5:56 · For: Family Ties
YES!!!! Oh My Word! I am so happy you're writing more about the lovely Lupins. My only regret at the end of ALMT was that Tonks wasn't pregnant. You must have read my mind.

I can't think of anything to criticise, so will just say that from the beginning I was smiling. Remus' utter contentment with his life, the details when he laughed at Spindleshaft saying he was barking; it is all so beautifully set. Ah, and how nice to see Tonks as a quivering wreck full of doubts - so unlike her normal self - yet in perfect keeping given her story throughout Half-Blood Prince.

So pleased to see your stories on the board. And please forgive the fangirling.


Name: KiwiGirlRox (Signed) · Date: 08/15/09 4:34 · For: Family Ties
OMG! This is an awesome story as a second part to A Little More Time. I finished reading ALMT today and then when I logged on this had appeared in recent and I read it. I can't wait for the next one! Quite funny as well as serious :) I seriously though Tonks had gone mad before she told Remus what happened!

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