Reviewer: ForeveraGryffindor
Date: 08/09/13 16:39
Chapter: Skin of Steel

Wonderful writing

Reviewer: ShadowNeo
Date: 12/13/10 16:31
Chapter: Under the Mistletoe

This is very well thought out.
This definetly would fill in the lines between what happened and the book
I would say this is a very real representation of what could happen
I cannot wait for you to update!

Reviewer: ThestralSong13
Date: 09/05/10 13:29
Chapter: Putting it together

Wow... Hermione cutting... I never considered how deep her state of desperation must have been at this point...
This is a very well-written and captivationg story thus far!

Reviewer: September December
Date: 07/30/10 1:10
Chapter: Under the Mistletoe

Great story, please update soon! :)

Reviewer: SlytherinDaydreamer
Date: 07/07/10 10:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Slippery Slope

Really loved drunk Hermione! Hope we'll see more of her!

Reviewer: 14hundred
Date: 06/21/10 19:58
Chapter: Under the Mistletoe

this is a really good story:)))))

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 06/21/10 19:49
Chapter: Under the Mistletoe

Uhhh... Hermione is feeling reckless!! Nice!

I like where this is going.. kind of... I mean the plot. Not the idea of Hermione unconscious and some random person approaching her... That's puzzling and interesting and a bit scary.

A detail if I may, wasn't Cormac a Ravenclaw? By the way you described his way to come pick up Hermione for the party, sounds like he came down the Gryffindor boy's staircase...

BTW, I just loooooved how you have Herms this edgy, alluring ways. Usually I see her portrayed as a goody-two-shoes who can't flirt to save her life. It was refreshing to see her seducing a troll (and enjoying how easy it was) What can I cay, some guys simple are like that!! So, yeah, I liked that part very much!

I like this turn of events very much! ^_^

Hoping for a quick update!!

Author's Response: Awe thanks! I thought exploring this side of her would be an interesting task. And nope, Cormac was a Gryffindor, Remember he tried out for the Quidditch team against Ron? And I was hoping to leave the ending in a bit of suspense :) Yes, some guys just are that simple. Fun right? haha

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 06/20/10 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Slippery Slope

THANK YOU GINNY!!

Quite a git Seamus! I was pretty happy when he caught her... now, not so much! Although we have to admit, she did start the kiss...

Like it. I want to see where this goes!

Reviewer: clarabelle
Date: 03/08/10 15:31
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Slippery Slope

its sooo amazing! keep going puhlease!

Reviewer: crucio4life
Date: 10/02/09 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Slippery Slope

OMG..this is excellent!! i

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