Oh, this is a wonderful start. Very curious to see where you will go with it. Your writing style is very smooth and engaging!
I'm already working on Chapter 15, but MuggleNet FF's validation staff don't seem to be awake at the wheel, as I've posted the next chapter quite a while ago... :P
Well, I'm under the same pen name at FanFiction dot net, so if you want, you can check out the fully up-to-date version there. Same pen name at HPFF, too. :)
Thanks for reviewing!