How very upsetting. I love the jokey bit at the beginning, seems as though they were very happy. And the marauder clock is an excellent insert. I still don't understand why they didn't disapparate immediately when they knew Peter betrayed them, they could've kept moving like the trio did in DH until they could contact Dumbledore and get a new, trustworthy secret keeper. Sorry, I'm a what if and why person. Great fic, and I love that song too.
This has such a sweet ending, I really like it. I found it interesting that you had James and Lily know he was coming - haven't seen that one before, good work. I also loved the maurader clock :P
...*sniff* So sad. I loved it, I loved the song you chose, I love what Lily says to Harry before Voldemort shows up. Nicely done!
OH MY GOD that was the sadest and yet happyest that was you wort the beast story i've ever read in my in tirer liffe
*snif* That was so sad! * sobs hysterically and reaches for a Kleenex* Good job! 10/10
Whoa. That was amazing, so tragic. Excellent work!
im totaly wit harry4ginny or is ir ginny4harry? anyway i luved the clock idear and it waz sad, but a awsome story!plz write more 2 this story or write more stories!!
Aww so sad! That was great, I liked the idea about the clock!
OMG that was so sad i was allmost crying. Please, please, please write more stories like this. *10 10 10*
I love it! I always cried whenever that part of Dumbo came on! Are you going to write more or is this a one-shot? Cuz I think you should write more!!!!
beautifully written so sad poor potters.
v.v.v. sad but a gr8 story!
i luv that poem! my mum cries everytime she watches dumbo! great story, keep writing more stories.