Love the story, and the beginning. I'm waiting for more!
This is a good opening for a story. I really enjoy true historical fiction about other cultures and geographical regions in the magical world. The Harry Potter books are confined to contemporary Great Britian, but have a world-wide audience. Hope th aat you post another chapter soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm excited about this challenge, because it allows me to explore a bit of my own country's history and combine it with Potterverse in my own way. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can! ~LiLu