I love the style of this piece. The broken prose echoes the mood I get from reading about Sirius and this women. I loved the symbol of the Church! Fantastic!
That was well written, though I usually don't like songfics. But I was impressed that someone else is familiar with Vienna Teng.
The banter between Remus and Sirius at the end was my favorite part.
Author's Response: Vienna Teng is excellent music, I must say. Hurray for VT fans. =) And thank you for taking the time out to review! I love writing dialogue between Remus and Sirius; they're two of the most entertaining fictional characters to ever inhabit my head, that's for sure.
Hmm, I'm wondering here how something can be brilliant in simplicity. I loved the Remus/Sirius dynamics, well-written. I was a little doubtful later on regarding the girl Sirius meets, but that paragraph itself of Sirius reacting first to her presence is written quite remarkably that everything else was more than easy to ignore.
Remus sighs. “Non-edible.” Loved this whole conversation - it was very, alive.
And oh, if this would mean anything to you: I think you got your writing mojo back.
Author's Response: Hmm... the scene with Sirius and the girl in her apartment? Yeah, it's a bit sketchy, isn't it? I just figured that, after 13 years of lacking human contact, Sirius would be desperate for some company, however form that may take. But in any case, I do love writing dialogue for him and Remus. So much, in fact, that I tend not to mind when they take over my head. >.> And of course, thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you think I've got my mojo back -- hopefully I'll be able to come up with more stuff in the near future.