I like this! It was a tad confusing, but I daresay I figured it out.
Wow, I love these. They're extremely well-written...and one from each house, all put together. Great little moments in time to hone in on. Thanks!
Wooooooooooowwww.........This is really good. I'm impressed.
I really like this story. I like the characters that you chose, especially Peter. That's an amazing choice. I like everyone you chose. They were all great choices. I just love this story. It was fun to read.
Wow, this is really good. You showed a very human side to everyone, and still they embody their House's characteristics very well. I think the best one was the one about Narcissa. I'm surprised but very glad you chose Wormtail for Gryffindor. All in all, great, great job. Keep it up!