Ok, either I'm really dense or you're really good at the whole suspense thing. I still can't figure out who it is. I hope Draco will suck it up and confide in Katie. Good job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Haha, hopefully I'm really good at the whole suspense thing! *sigh* Draco's pride is certainly fickle.
Nice start. Looking forward to reading more!
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I have no idea. Usually I am pretty good at guessing, but you have me entirely confused! Enjoy!
Author's Response: Wow, not one guess? No, I suppose not. Perhaps the next chapter will offer some new clues... Thanks for reviewing. I like keeping people on their toes ;)
I really like this, in the first chapter which scar was Harry talking about, the obvious lightning bolt or the Umbridge inflicted one?
Author's Response: He is talking about the lightning bolt scar :)
I wonder if these characters will ever realize that too much pride is a bad thing? Draco should have told Katie. It's very well written and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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I feel for him. I think Katie's father really is sick, or that soemone took her, and I hope that Draco survives all this.
Author's Response: I feel for Draco too. I actually feel a bit bad about all the pain I'm putting him through! But a story is a story and I assure you all that there is method in my madness! Thankyou to everyone who has reviewed! I love reading your comments :)
I really like this chapter. I hope everything is going to be okay with them. I hope so. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I have some loyal followers lol
Well, I think you have a good point. I'm a bit confused, because it seems to be his wedding day, and yet he seems to already be back from his honeymoon, but maybe I missed something. Your logic seems to be working well, and I am going to follow this...
Author's Response: I agree that the prologue is very confusing and disjointed. Maybe I will rewrite it sometime. Thanks for the review!
This chapter is freaken amazing. I LOVE it. I love the last paragraph. I really love the fight thing between Harry and Draco. It was greaat. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's up as quick as this one was. :p
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The story is very interesting. You have started out nice, I hope that you will continue in this fashion
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Very nice. Harry and Draco have more in common than they ever realized. I can't wait to see how it unfolds. And maybe Katie will be more forgiving than Draco realizes. After all, he almost killed her (accidently) in HBP but she still married him. ;)
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I'm very intrigued and looking forward to the next chapter. Good beginning!
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oooohhhhhhh, so excited for the next chapter
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so far so good.
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Draco and Katie. That's an unusual pair. I think this story is going to be interesting. I can't wait to see how Draco tries to convince Harry to help him. Nicely written.
Author's Response: Yes, the Draco and Harry relationship is an interesting one but I think I found some common ground between them which helped. Chapter one is ready and in the queue!
I really like this story. It'sreally interesting. I wonder what Darco is going to say the Harry. I really want to read the next chapter. This story looks really good. I really like your summary too.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it
Curious as to why Draco chose Katie Bell for a wife. Will there be a backstory about this as well?
Good luck on future chapters.
Author's Response: Thankyou. Yes it is an interesting pairing but you will find out why!
