Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/19/09 11:55
Chapter: Allegro

Good contrast between Draco and Ron. I'm talking here about how Draco can be naturally polite. Certainly this is a side of Draco we never saw at Hogwarts.

It might be a little too much of a fairy tale, that is Draco might be just a little to perfect here but I will see where this story goes.

Author's Response: Well, Draco was eloquent in the books – rude, but he knew how to say it, if you know what I mean... Plus, Lucius knew how to be charming (it was a gift he didn’t care to use very often, but still…) and I’m sure he gave Draco a lesson. As for him being *too* perfect – he’s trying to impress her, the way any man would on a date :)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/19/09 11:35
Chapter: Moderato

I like how you write about the vacation and the various ways Draco gets inserted into it.

Author's Response: Thank you. He does turn up a little too often for Ginny's liking.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/19/09 11:13
Chapter: Adagietto

Whoa, was that whole chapter just a dream sequence?

Author's Response: Oh, no. After a - er - nice day with Malfoy, poor Ginny dreams of him too. It's that 'he's not at all handsome' lie catching up with her :)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/18/09 21:31
Chapter: Con Brio

This is officially my favorite chapter. I just love it! I The emotion was amazing. The characterization was amazing. I really love Draco. Their talking at the end was really great. I imagined them saying that to each other. I'm so excited for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it - it's one of those topics they just *had* to talk about. And I wanted Draco to express regret without saying he’s sorry or in any way apologising. While Ginny gets to show she can be both determined and deeply understanding. :) Next chapter shouldn't be too far away!

Reviewer: hijabi4life12
Date: 09/15/09 20:31
Chapter: Dolce

aw I think she should tell Hermione! I mean, they ARE best friends!
Haha, I love Ron in this chapter, you describe him pretty well. Always red and protective haha.
I'm falling for Draco in this story, he's a gentleman, i love itt =]
keep em comingg! haha

Author's Response: Yes, Ginny could tell Hermione - but then again it isn't so easy to tell your friend you're dating a man who hated her at school... And I based Ron on how he acted in the books when he found out Ginny was dating - I always found that very amusing. A little overprotective of his little sister :) I'm glad you liked it, next chapter isn't too far away.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/12/09 19:17
Chapter: Dolce

I really like this chapter. I love Ron in it. I love how he gets jelous and embarised so easily. I also think that it's so funny how they keep saying that she wouldn't date Draco but she is dating Draco. I love it! The ening is really good, too. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, poor Ron always gets angry around Draco, doesn't he? Nobody wants their old school enemy to be on vacation on the same island! As for Ginny ... it's getting tricky to keep Draco a secret.

Reviewer: hijabi4life12
Date: 09/11/09 17:20
Chapter: Scerzando

I absolutely adore thiss!
Your writing really inspired me to continue with mine! I haven't written just for fun for over 2 months! ah
I hope you update soon =]

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased to hear you're writing again - hope to see your story up soon :) Update should be here any day, I believe.

Reviewer: Lefthanded Phoenix
Date: 09/09/09 4:00
Chapter: Scerzando

Loving the story! I like the way the chapter titles match the mood of the chapter. I also like Ginny's indesicion over Draco, it keeps you in suspense. Don't stop now!

Author's Response: Thank you! It isn't too easy to deside when it comes to Draco, is it? He's a very closed person ;)

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 09/07/09 19:58
Chapter: Scerzando

this was a really enjoyable update!! love all the characters (ron is so realistic hah)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy to hear you like them all. I'm just playing with poor Ron, really. Just wait till Aunt Muriel returns...

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/07/09 18:16
Chapter: Scerzando

I really really like this chapter and it's on the verge of love. It's just another great chapter. I really like all of the Ron/Hermione parts in it as well as the Draco/Ginny parts. I just like all of it! I love that dates that Draco and Ginny have . I also like the chapter titles. They are a good idea. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think my chapter titles worked well - I got inspired by Italy, I guess. And Draco does well on dates, does he not? I don't know why I imagine him being rather formal - it's probably that Manor his family live in. Anyone living like that has to be old fashioned... maybe. At least when I write them :)

Reviewer: darkside-evan
Date: 09/07/09 8:50
Chapter: Sotto

love love love keeping writing its very good

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Wandering Wand
Date: 09/07/09 2:45
Chapter: Sotto

"I’m a hundred and ten, Ginny. Do you have any idea how many names I’ve learnt in my days?"
haha, love it :) My favorite Muriel quote far now.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like Muriel's remarks. I sure love writing her - it lets me write all those rude things nobody really says out loud - except Muriel, of course. :)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/06/09 22:01
Chapter: Sotto

Your chapters keep getting better and better. This is the only believable Ginny/Draco that I've read. I really love the charicterization in this. I think you have done everybody perfactally. Ron and Hermione are great too. Do you know how many chapters this is going to be? I can't wait for the next one to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased you like my story :) We'll be seeing more of Ron in the next chapter... The story is very close to finished, and I think we're landing on around 20 chapters.

Reviewer: Teardrop1
Date: 09/06/09 11:45
Chapter: Fermata

Good chapter. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter's not far away...

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/01/09 6:37
Chapter: Fermata

I really like this chapter. I really like Muriel. She is very funny. I love the relationship between Ginny and Draco. It's very believable. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you find Muriel funny. I did try to write her that way - funny in a mean way... heh.

Reviewer: wiltedrose
Date: 08/31/09 14:13
Chapter: Presto

this is a really entertaining story p;ease keep writing

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm almost done writing, actually. It seems the story ends up at around twenty chapters :)

Reviewer: samspectacular
Date: 08/13/09 18:45
Chapter: Presto

Great chapter! I like how Draco is more sensitive and completely honest. Why can't Ginny just realize he's not the enemy?

O well, she wll come around. I absolutely loved the line about stalking her tomorrow if he wanted to. I can't wait till the next chapter.

Are you going to write more after you finish this story and How a murder can change a life is all posted? Because you are an amazing writer and I love your stories. You really develop the characters, like they act like themselves and slowly begin to change. like I said can't wait till the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, it would take quite a bit for anyone to trust Draco, really. I'm glad you like the line about stalking her tomorrow - she does want to see him again, after all ;) As for writing more - I don't really know. If I get inspired, I sure will. And I'm so flattered to hear that you like my writing! Thank you :)

Reviewer: Teardrop1
Date: 08/13/09 11:27
Chapter: Presto

I enjoyed this chapter. Ginny seems determind to hate Draco. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. Well, Draco isn't too easy to like, really.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 08/12/09 21:27
Chapter: Presto

I really like their date. It was good. I hope the next chapter is up soon.

Author's Response: So romantic, wasn't it? ;) I'm glad you still like my story - there is a fair few chapters left.

Reviewer: Teardrop1
Date: 08/08/09 16:11
Chapter: Allegro

Good chapter. I look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you! As usual, the next update shouldn't be too far away.

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