Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 07/20/09 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like this.

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 07/19/09 4:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

a well-written story and a credible portrayal of aberforth.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/19/09 0:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, this was a great fic! very realistic, too.

Reviewer: MetamorphmagusLupin
Date: 07/18/09 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this little glimpse into the young lives of the Dumbledore brothers. i agree with you that there are too many stories about Aberforth hating Albus out there and you did a wonderful job showing more complex emotions from him. My only negative is the use of the Muffliato spell. That spell wasn't invented until much later--when Albus was teaching at Hogwarts--by a brilliant, young Slytherin who considered himself a Prince of sorts. But overall, excellent story.

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