Reviewer: overlord
Date: 07/27/11 17:29
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

Why haven't you submitted another chapter? I want to read more.

Reviewer: DestinyMoonStar
Date: 02/25/11 11:19
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

Love it, wish you would write more. :)

Reviewer: Half-Blood-Princess21
Date: 11/23/10 21:04
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

Beautiful =)

Reviewer: BlackBunny1991
Date: 05/09/10 20:02
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

More Please! I loved it. When is the next chapter going to be up??

Reviewer: severuslove7
Date: 10/03/09 0:51
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

this is excellent! I love it! hope to see more :-)

Reviewer: Miranda86
Date: 08/27/09 18:00
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

You may like some of my S/L fics. They'll all be posted on my livejournal account.
http://mirandamastin.livejournal.com/

Reviewer: elyice
Date: 07/18/09 19:16
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

I've been waiting for a really good, wait, AMAZING lily/sev fic, and I found it! This was really well written, I love it!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! It really means a lot to me! :)

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 07/18/09 10:28
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

Oh Lotte!!! *HUGS* This is amazing! I must say that this may just be my favorite fic on that I've read! Great job and congratulations on getting it validated!

I'm proud to say that I am the beta of this story!
~Lexi~

Author's Response: *hugs back* Awww! Thanks so much for all your help, it really means a lot! --Lotte

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/17/09 17:11
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

I really like this chapter. It's cool how you made Severus in this. You described things really well, too. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's as good as this one was, because it was really good.

Author's Response: I hope for that as well and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: red_haired_girl
Date: 07/17/09 13:31
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

Great story! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 07/17/09 11:33
Chapter: Chapter One: Battered, Bruised, And A Little Bit Used

Poor Sev! awww... hes a little creepy obsessive with lily but it seems like he really needs her b/c of his situation at home. your writing is really good and i love this story so far! please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! =D

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