Reviews For Snowflakes
Reviewer: mortaldraco
Date: 02/26/11 12:47
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

*squee* I KNEW I should've checked back sooner! I blame YOU biology! I'm really hyper now, 'cause yooooooooou updated! ....a while ago actually...I'm a bit late...but WHATEVER! *pants* Okay, I'm cool. But seriously, this was gooooood.

Author's Response: Oh, Biology :) Next time, I'll be sure to mention it to you when I update! And thanks for the funny review XD Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 02/23/11 10:37
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

Umm. . . I'm still waiting! I want this next chapter as much as I want the last HP movie. So please, help your devoted fan . . . finish the next chapter!! :D

Author's Response: I'm really sorry, these past few weeks have been super busy... Hopefully, I will be able to finish the next chapter soon :) Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: Siriusblack_tonks
Date: 02/21/11 6:05
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

This is REALLY good :)
Keep it up

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :]

Reviewer: LILY_ISTHEBEST
Date: 02/19/11 6:13
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

plz plz plz plz update soon!seriously luv this fic!i really luved it!keep it up!

Author's Response: I'm trying really hard to get it written, but I've been super busy lately... Hopefully I can get the next chapter finished soon! I'm so pleased that you like it so much :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Goddess Athena
Date: 02/16/11 18:10
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

IT FINALLY HAPPENED!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOO!

Author's Response: YYYAAAAAYYYY! It did :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

perfect :D

Author's Response: Yipee! Glad you liked it :]

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 8:02
Chapter: Chapter 13: The Ahurewa Forest

when they changed into their animal forms it would be more practical that they had to be "naked" because their clothes dont just merge with their skin. If they do you need to make some sort of reference :) nice meeting remus thou!

Author's Response: Yay for Remus! Honestly, I didn't really want them to be in their birthday suits... It's a bit easier if the clothes just appear. Like when Peter Pettigrew becomes a human after being scabbers, he has clothes on. Thanks for Reviewing!

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 7:53
Chapter: Chapter 12: The Letter

the part with sirius telling lily that it was his fault and not james fault was really sweet :)
but lily should have been more shocked. She found out that the guy she hates the most saved her "best friend" she would be speechless

Author's Response: Well, I have to say, at this point she doesn't really hate James all that much :) I'm happy you liked the part with Sirius! Thanks for all the reviews you left!

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 7:42
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Chat

this is a very sweet chat with sirius and lily :) great!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! :)

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 4:52
Chapter: Chapter 6: The Warming Hut

when lily asks about remus, it would be more convincing that both james and sirius were both shocked, i mean she just randomly guess and stuff :P
interesting but there needs to be sense of secrey when lily guesses that remus is a werwolf :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I really just wanted to make sure that the readers knew that Lily knew and, unfortunately, I didn't spend much time on reactions... Thanks for reading and for reviewing!

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 4:41
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Hot Chocolate Social

interesting ending :D james is a bit too arogant though :P

Author's Response: Well, remember that, at this point, they are all sixteen. Guys are pretty arrogant at that age, if you ask me :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 4:31
Chapter: Chapter 4:The Ski Lift

when lily was talking about sev, could be a litte bit more hesitent on telling james, he is of course her "enemy" and telling him stuff like that is going to take some time

Author's Response: Yeah, at that point of the story, I was more concerned about moving the plot along... But I totally understand what you're saying. Thanks for the constructive criticism!

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 4:26
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Buffet

ending was a bit too fast for my likings but so far so good!

Author's Response: Sorry, but thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BornToRead333
Date: 02/15/11 4:18
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

language: eg: parked(landed would have been better)
:)
its good!

Author's Response: Aw, the early chapters are sooo bad : But thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Siriusblack_tonks
Date: 02/14/11 13:58
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

This is really good! I became a member just so I could review this :)

Author's Response: Aw, that's lovely! Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

Reviewer: RavenclawAspirant
Date: 02/12/11 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

I loved the end part when they kissed! i thought that was very well done. The only thing i have to comment on is that the situation still seems a bit impractical to me. I mean in the books with underage magic the ministry contacted within minutes. I still really like it though. Also thank you for responding to my posts it is nice to have my questions answered i wish all books i read could have that!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the ending! And yes, the underage magic thing is definitely something to look out for, it will be explained in a few chapters! Don't worry :) And I love responding to reviews! And I agree, it's awesome to be able to get feedback from authors. Have you ever heard of John Green or the Vlogbrothers? They are a youtube channel and John is an author and he has a really close connection with his readers. I would really check them out! Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EvangelineLongfellow
Date: 02/11/11 9:42
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

:))

Author's Response: =D

Reviewer: moira_patronus
Date: 02/08/11 8:59
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

Are you a witch? Because I i don't know how you get these chapters finished so quickly and you are still in school. Anyway, this is fantastic! You have some serious talent!

Author's Response: Double post! Win :D

Reviewer: moira_patronus
Date: 02/08/11 8:55
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

Are you a witch? Because I i don't know how you get these chapters finished and you are still in school.
Anyway, this is fantastic! You have some serious talent!

Author's Response: I'm thinking that I am a witch! Either that or I stay up really late because I feel really bad when I haven't posted in a while :) Plus, homework isn't that important, right? Just joking... stay in school kids. And thank you! I'm pleased that you like the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :]

Reviewer: lilyevansfan
Date: 02/07/11 18:08
Chapter: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

this is so interesting! great job!!!

Author's Response: I'm pleased that you think so! Thanks for reading and reviewing :) It means a lot!

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