Reviews For Snowflakes
Reviewer: voldy_is_mouldy
Date: 07/12/09 0:25
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

That was really good, just remember this is set in the 80's. Really what to see more

Author's Response: righto! i wasnt exactly alive then... but i will try my best! thanks 4 the review! (and i love ur username!)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/11/09 19:43
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

I really feel bad for Lily. It must suck for her.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! and ya... i can only imagine what it would be like to have your enemy showing up everywhere you go!

Reviewer: RedhairedMom
Date: 07/11/09 15:06
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

been to Colorado. If this is a summer holiday, Colorado just isn't cold enough to ski, not where the tourist ski areas are. Aspen and Vail can be downright hot in the summer.

Author's Response: Oh my! You have caught the biggest flaw in this story! Wow I cant believe I didn't even think of that! I think I will go and edit that! Is Canada cold that time of year? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RedhairedMom
Date: 07/11/09 15:04
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

Good story so far but I have to wonder if you've ever

Author's Response: Ive got it! New Zealand!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/11/09 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

Oh, i had another question. Are you planning on having this story follow them back to Hogwarts or is it just during their vacation?

Author's Response: hmmm... thats a good question! i think its just gonna be the vacation, but maybe ill change it!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/11/09 13:39
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

haha hilarius!! very nice (:
i think once you wrote 'Lily' with a small l.
And I don't thinkSirius was james' sidekick- they were more like a 'double-act', always together and equal....
I loved it and can't waitfor the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! oopsie! i think there is something wrong with my shift key... but thanks for catching that! and ur rite about the double act thing. thanks again and i will try to update soon!

Reviewer: siilly_bookworm_28
Date: 07/08/09 21:33
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

AHHHHH HAHAHHAHA!!! Poor Lily, but I just love the circumstance! Good luck, James! I can't wait to see more of this!!

Author's Response: Thanks 4 reading and reviewing! i'll try to update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: april_fools_fun
Date: 07/08/09 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

That was hilarious!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Professor Applebom
Date: 07/08/09 17:21
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

HAHAHAhahahahHAHAHAhahahahahaHAHA!!!
It is absolutely FANTION-TASTIC!
I loved the ending! It was like a 55 fiction!
Mr. Boeckman, everyone's FAVORITE teacher who NO ONE hates at all, would be proud. (aka: the Wuthering Heights hater!!)

Author's Response: TREVZ! hey thanks 4 the review! it was... sweet? an hu *couldnt* love mr boeckman? thanks dood!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 07/08/09 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I love it!!!!
(and not to be annoying, but...:
'her usual bright blue eyes'
this might (probably) is just because I'm dumb, but her USUAL blue eyes? Like in they're a usual color??? Or they are usually blue??? (that doesn't make scense)
Also,
'...at Lily horrified expression...'
shouldn't it be Liliy'S horrified expression???
And
'...her two least favorite people...'
Of course they are her least favourite people- except for Voldemort and the Death Eaters, I hope!! :P
Anyway, good job! And keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
~Andrea

Author's Response: Thaks for the review!!! and no you are not dumb cuz u totally caught that and i think ur rite... ill go and edit it! im gonna try to update soon! thanks again!!! :D

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/08/09 15:56
Chapter: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

I have to read what happens next! This sounds like it's gunna be a good story. It's a good idea for a story, too.

Author's Response: Thakns so much for reading! i will try to update soon!

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