Reviews For To Meet Again
Reviewer: BlueJoker
Date: 04/13/11 18:08
Chapter: To Meet Again

Aha, cute! You got the characterisation so spot on! Tonks was clumsy and bubbly, but not an idiot (a horribly insulting trap many authors stumble into) and Remus was self-loathing but not a complete emo about it. Wonderful, just perfect, I especially like the fact that he remembered her from years ago, but needed some prompting; it would have been awkward if he didn't remember her at all, but grossly cliche if he'd had some kind of creepy obsession with her all these years.
I think I would have liked to have seen her first Auror meeting, but I have to admit that it was refreshing to read a romance one-shot concerning a first time meeting where they don't immediately fall in love. Such fics are rarely realistic, and it would not suit this couple in particular. It's really sweet though, I would love to see further development, you write them so well.

One small criticism is that I would like to see more description, although please do take that with a pinch of salt because my stories are completely overloaded with description.

All in all, brilliant job :D

Author's Response: Thanks, BlueJoker! I'm glad you enjoyed this and found it realistic (well, as realistic a story can be about a couple of wizards, lol). I really appreciate your input and will take into consideration your suggestion. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: dandy_like_a_lion
Date: 07/07/09 16:52
Chapter: To Meet Again

That was awesome! i wish you would write about the meeting too!

Author's Response: Thank you for the response! I'm glad you liked it, and maybe I will write about the meeting. Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 07/04/09 13:32
Chapter: To Meet Again

Ummm...this should definitely be longer than a one-shot. :)

It was great! Their conversation was so lovely, and I just love your characterization of Tonks, and Remus' reaction to her.

Great one-shot!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I know it could have been longer than a oneshot; maybe I'll write a companion piece later. It was just an idea that came to me and I had to write it down. Thank you again for the comments. :)

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