Aha, cute! You got the characterisation so spot on! Tonks was clumsy and bubbly, but not an idiot (a horribly insulting trap many authors stumble into) and Remus was self-loathing but not a complete emo about it. Wonderful, just perfect, I especially like the fact that he remembered her from years ago, but needed some prompting; it would have been awkward if he didn't remember her at all, but grossly cliche if he'd had some kind of creepy obsession with her all these years.
I think I would have liked to have seen her first Auror meeting, but I have to admit that it was refreshing to read a romance one-shot concerning a first time meeting where they don't immediately fall in love. Such fics are rarely realistic, and it would not suit this couple in particular. It's really sweet though, I would love to see further development, you write them so well.
One small criticism is that I would like to see more description, although please do take that with a pinch of salt because my stories are completely overloaded with description.
All in all, brilliant job :D
Author's Response: Thanks, BlueJoker! I'm glad you enjoyed this and found it realistic (well, as realistic a story can be about a couple of wizards, lol). I really appreciate your input and will take into consideration your suggestion. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)
That was awesome! i wish you would write about the meeting too!
Author's Response: Thank you for the response! I'm glad you liked it, and maybe I will write about the meeting. Thanks again! :)
Ummm...this should definitely be longer than a one-shot. :)
It was great! Their conversation was so lovely, and I just love your characterization of Tonks, and Remus' reaction to her.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I know it could have been longer than a oneshot; maybe I'll write a companion piece later. It was just an idea that came to me and I had to write it down. Thank you again for the comments. :)