Wow. This is a really awesome chapter you wrote. I like your style a lot! I can't wait to see what comes up in the next chapters. Goodluck!--Nadia
Author's Response: Unfortunately FF decided that the second chapter I submitted didn't suit their "rules". Apparently the way I use these (' ' ' ' ' ) for conversations is wrong. Funny thing is I received my Proficiency Certificate in English writing like that. Maybe the Admins at FF are correct and the rest of us mortals is wrong? It must be... Surely Cambridge couldn't possibly hold a candle against these guys, right?